zhynnyhz

Bangchan handsome.

alishasio

hi, bukan saja nak promote tapi nak mintak pendapat dengan buku yang saya baru buat tu okay tak. sebabnya saya tak biasa tulis dalam bahasa melayu tapi saya nak try at the same time saya rasa macam awkward.
          
          jadi saya nak tanya pendapat sama ada okay ke idok

zhynnyhz

@n4namik3nto_ ikr even though my first language is Malay but when it comes to writing sumpah awkward. Try not to baca buku yang cringe that's all. Remember, plot main peranan actually and how you convey it through your writing.
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alishasio

OMGGG THANK YOU SEBAB REPLY !!!
            
            i will take your advice and try my best to write the book :)
            
            kita bukannya taknak baca buku melayu, tapi kadang ii rasa awkward tapi sekarang nak taknak kena baca sbbnya yelah nak kaji mcm mana diaorang tulis apa semua
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zhynnyhz

@n4namik3nto_ heyy, I dah baca your book and I think it's good. I know it might be a little bit awkward when you write in Malay, trust me my book in draft yang I tulis in Malay still tak bergerak. 
            
            So I think, you boleh try baca Malay books and see how the authors wrote them. If you write better in English you can always just translate them then you atur your ayat. Good luck with your book! I would love to see how the story is going to be.
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alteruniversemaximum

Hi, just wanted to say, boleh tak tolong support i? I tengah buat buku sekarang, so kalau boleh tolong la baca sikit.. nak you tengok ok ke tak? Just not sure if it's okay or not.. it's about naim tho.. that's all.. thanks :)

zhynnyhz

@Lurve_11 You're welcome. I'm honoured honestly (seriously tak tipu). Goodluck on your writing and don't push yourself too much kay. If the idea datang then it datang if tak then you tidur je lah
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alteruniversemaximum

@zhynnyhz okay, I'll take your advice. I actually tengah continue. Takleh tidur so yeah. Actually your story made me wanna make a book. Thanks for the advice. Appreciated.
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zhynnyhz

@Lurve_11 Hi, I've read your book and I think the plot is fine just that the chapter seem a bit short for my liking (this is just my opinion cuz I like a long chapter) but don't need to listen to me la just do it with your own style. I think if the chapters were a bit longer than it would be more enjoyable rather than it being stop setengah jalan. Yeah, overall, your book is fine. I'm looking forward to it
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