shadowwriter29

Hello author… I know I shouldn’t post this here.. but I genuinely wanted some feedbacks and if u do like to read dark academia, mystery and thriller…
          
          I am new to wattpad and wrote my 1st book.....
          
          Pls do check out my book and feel free to share your feedbacks.
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/407567763?utm_source=ios&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details&wp_uname=shadowwriter29
          Thank you!

shadowwriter29

@ziaredf Absolutely!
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shadowwriter29

Thank you author for devoting some of your time to my stories.. it means a lot.
            Actually I made the bio page for the readers to get a knowledge of the characters the main lead will encounter so for as to know those characters before handed….
            I just saw what all other good book writers in here did.. and i saw that they did these also.. so I tried to upgrade my story with this.. ( if u know what I mean)..
            And as for the pace .. I truly am sorry.. it was my 1st time writing these genre , so I didn’t know it at first..
            Then when I read it multiple times after that, then I really knew there was mistake in it’s pace..
            Thank you soo much for the feedbacks ✨
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ziaredf

@shadowwriter29 Your welcome.
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IntotheStreets

Hey, thanks for the follow. 
          
          Do checkout my newly launched book, Qafila ! 
          
          New BOOK LAUNCH !!  
          
          In the outskirts of the city of Murkam, witches are allowed to breathe. In this state, Ruhi struggles to discover her identity and falls into the fate of  ancient elemental powers far greater than she ever imagined. As destiny unfolds, three other women from vastly different worlds-a pirate's daughter, a royal trapped in a palace, and a cunning courtesan-are unknowingly drawn toward the same fate. 
          Bounded by secrets, curses, and lost legends, their paths collide to form a single journey: a **Qafila** destined to change their world. But as hidden powers awaken and dangerous truths surface, the four women must decide-will they embrace their destiny, or be destroyed by it?
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/271767530?utm_source=ios&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_writing&wp_page=create&wp_uname=IntotheStreets

ziaredf

@IntotheStreets Your story is very nice and indeed interesting. There are just some loopholes you need to fix but either way its HAVE DAMN POTENTIAL.
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