zinnyHarrys

bellasilver11

Sharpmouth

Hey there, Z. Thanks a bunch for following me. ♥ I'd appreciate if you give my book SLATED FOR LOVE a sneak peek and who knows, you just might like the story. Your votes would be appreciated. For easy access, I attached the link. 
          
          https://my.w.tt/idxTI0miZ9

Jessica_Bellah

@ZinnyHarry, I just read your book, and l loved the intro. But I have a suggestion. I think you should use double quotation mark(") when your character speaks, and also, after like three, four, five lines, then you make a space, before containing. But all in all, I liked your story, mostly the intro. I hope I helped, ❤

Jessica_Bellah

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Jessica_Bellah

@bellasilver11 oh yeah. My phones on autocorrect, and i overlook them at times, but thanks for the help, really appreciate it ❤❤
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zinnyHarrys

@bellasilver11 your book is cool ... am still new writing but then you need to respell correctly most words in the book ....
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