Hi Zizi! Recent came across your Fireflies feat. Umemiya… loved your OC, your potent words and absolutely the strong storyline!
First with your OC, personality setting was beyond on point to build such chemistry with Umemiya. Always keeping him on edge… you know, it’s rare to see angst with him. And with Rin, this emotional tug of war was really drawing out Umemiya’s true feelings towards her. As if Ume was learning something new about himself through her every single day.
Potent use of language, precisely illustrated the background of scene with calculation before moving on. Your portion of scene setting compared to main line is just right. Good pacing. Less is more. Which always leaves room for imagination. Descriptions are vivid and gravitating.
Storyline…s. Multiple hidden clues for future scenes. Immense possibilities. Had a heartful from the Happy Birthday Special. For the Valentine’s Day special? Undeniably a clue for some heart wrenching and yearning for each other beyond Ume’s graduation into adulthood. Angst and fluff intertwined. And these parts aren’t superficial at all. They got you to think and replay in your head over and over again. I keep having to come back for more.
Got lots to tell you about how much I love your Fireflies.
Reading it from scratch for the second time now. Can’t wait for your new chapter to release.
