beomgyumoon

Heyyy I just want to say that you are a fantastic writer. I'm an aspiring author, and I’m looking to reach a wider audience for my own work. 
          If you’re open to it, I would love for you to read one of my books and share your thoughts. Additionally, if you have any tips on how to encourage more people to discover and enjoy my stories, I would greatly appreciate your advice!

Yoe_123

Read two of your books. You’re honestly a great writer and you have good story lines. But everything felt so repetitive In both books, and honestly I don’t mean that with wrong intentions. Just some advice from a readers point 
          
          An example is on the new book, it felt like most conversations dayvon & Deja were having was just her constantly asking the same questions in every chapter

Yoe_123

You’re welcome, I’m so glad you didn’t take that the wrong way lol
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zmbiegrl_0

@Yoe_123 Thank You, I have new books coming and i promise they wont be like the two you read and thank you for your advice your the first person to say something!!!♥️
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