zoe_190

Chapter four of Trepidation is up! Hope you enjoy it. x

oliviarose85

Thanks for the follow! If you want to tell me things about your character so I can help, just message me. 
          
          I've rewritten book summaries, I've helped authors figure out the ends of their books and I've edited. I can tell you what your strengths are and where you need a little work. 
          
          When your done with each scene, keep asking yourself if you described her enough. Did you hit up her physical expressions as well as what was happening inside of her? Did you show his movements and expressions? How did his stare make her feel? Hot or cold?

zoe_190

@oliviarose85 hahahaha
            Alright then! Good luck with your book!
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oliviarose85

@zoe_190 
            
            That's a big one (that's what she said).
            
            Grab as many editors as you can in the Improve Your Writing  thread. Each editor will find something new. 
            
            I couldn't start it now, as I am currently adding chapters to my completed book to space events out. Then I must edit before the Watty's
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zoe_190

@oliviarose85 no problem! Yes I definitely will! I'd love it if you edit my book. Trepidation. It's okay if you're busy though!
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