VARHARARM

hay!!...can you review my story and give feedback on where should i correct it ?...(i saw you in many fantasy stories , thats why :) )

zoey_zaramii

@ VARHARARM  
            
            I really liked your writing. So keep writing, friend. because I think you are very talented.  Thank you for asking for my opinion. And I would be happy if you could tell me what you think of my stories :)
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