Your writing has some of the most balanced story elements that I've read in an extremely long time. You're starting off with an absolute impeccable story.
From a relationship building standpoint you develop all of your characters, don't show crazy bias to the mc. To an extent, every story should be unrealistic. It's a self insert fan fiction, but you do it in a very pleasant and not overbearing way.
Fight scenes are detailed and engaging in terms of every character that participates
Your characterization makes for a real easy read as well. Without immediate asshats to show a stark villan that the mc can hate. Your conflicts are paced and well designed when it comes to ahri as well as Jayce.
Lots of writers love to get to the "good part" either due to their own impatience or I guess many other reasons.
All in all I can drone on and on as to how much I appreciate your story. But I'd like to say that you're doing an amazing job. And hopefully I can show you that your efforts are being seen.
