@Royalbeautiful i loved ur work... There was a lot of twist to the story. It just brought out a whole new concept to love stories. But i was really disappointed in her choice, in my opinion she should have gone to Zabrij... But i guess it sort of taught us about reality as well. Nothing is ever perfect. And ur right... Often our pride and ego gets in the way of doing the right thing. Overall i really liked the story. To make it better, you could possibly get it edited perhaps, just to make the reading experience more enjoyful.. But i loved the plott.
