@the_rising_sun hi there there are a lot of things that i like about the story the plot development where the secrets get revealed ,i also like the chracter of alex his father james .mother rosie and susie who seems to be a great person and last but not the least my favorite parts are where gauri in the abscence of alex take care of everything as best as she can and the other ones are when she she recognize alex i really cried at that part anyways i don't dislike anything about the story cause its very smooth and perfect in every aspect what i really want you to do is to update your book cause ia kinda addicted to this book when cause i fi isbed it like in the first 5 hours and i didn't eben realize the time so tha ks for your hard work and plz do update your book thanks with love and best wishes zerwashkhan.....