This little chapter is everything wrong with 'Pocky Game'.
Logically wrong, timeline wrong, or just wrong in general.
Spoilers, obviously.
1.The first few chapters seemed to move strangely fast
2.There was an older friend mentioned in the first chapter, but it didn't go anywhere
3.Louie was an odd addition, kinda just wanted to finish off the triplets.
4.It was never made clear when Aiden fell in love with Wyatt. It bounces between 9th-11th grade
5.Not everyone's name was ever made clear, last name at least.
6.Even though the title was 'Pocky Game', Pocky never really had a big role in it
7.At one point, Wyatt was going to confess to Aiden about what he and Regan did.
8.Wednesday...was kinda just there.
9.There was an extra chapter, chapter 16 has 2 versions. I don't ever plan to release the other one, it's useless.
10.Regan was in love with Wyatt. Wyatt was not in love with Regan.
11.Jessie and Regan's relationship is kinda weird.
12.No there's no add ons to the last chapter...that's it.
I'm sure I can go on for about another 20 things, but we don't have time for that! Time for the Fun Fact!
Fun Fact: Extra Fun Facts!
1.Huey and Dewey are actually friends, just Dewey gets annoyed a lot
2.The last chapter is usually in the main character's point of view
3.I wrote Regan's last chapter before Wyatt's
4.At some point, I wanted Aiden and Wyatt to play the Pocky game
5.Jessie and Regan were supposed to hook up
6.There was going to be a Webby. Webby is another member of the triplets, just their friend.
7.My friend was supposed to make a new cover for the book, but it fell through.
8.The supposed new cover was going to be a bed with a Pocky box laying on it
And that's all for now!
Bye Bye for a few weeks! I'll be back soon!
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Pocky Game (Completed)
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