Out of Everyone on Wattpad... It Just Had To be Him!(on hold till march)

Chapter 1

im re-doing the book so im sorry if u liked the original version but i got stumped and then inspiration hit me. luckily for you when i wa stumped i created 10 chapters. every week ill pst 1. my posting day are weekends, holidays, or early release :)

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Pick on the side of Florida miami were the story takes place :)

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Love is a mysterious force. It tugs your heart, it breaks it, mends it, and of course can even make it grow bigger. Like the Grinch lol. The point is we need love in the world. How would you feel if no one loved you? Until he found you.

How would you feel when you were broken and had no one there for you? He finally found you.

How would you feel when you finally found you loved him so much he was the ONE? That was until he left you.

I used to love him, I admit it. But I couldn’t do anything about it. He didn’t choose to leave, I get that now but…… what hurt the most was he didn’t even say goodbye.

My  name is May Liberty, my friends call me Maya, M, or just May. His name was Tyler, we had met in kindergarten and were inseparable, until of course he left for Europe. Sometimes I cry myself to sleep sometimes because of him, I’m lucky because I found chanel, My best friend for life. I was all alone in  the bathroom crying. It was one of the first weeks Tyler had left me. She found me and comforted me.

Before I knew it we were best friends. She’s African-American and I’m Cuban/white. It’s a weird mix but somehow we make it work. She’s crazy, funny, cocky at times… kind of like Tyler. I guess that’s why I became friends with her in the first place. We have our own nicknames. Im sharky or sharkbait, she’s bunny boo or squirt. Without her in my life I would have completely shut down.

I was finally on the verge of forgetting Tyler. We were on the start of our last year in school, after that me and chanel would be able to go to F.I.U (florida international university). Yeah we lived in florida, in miami, let me tell you, if you get a chance to come here take it. Anyways heres my first day of my senior year……….

“Breakfast honey! Its you favorite!” my mom yelled from the kitchen downstairs. My head whipped up so fast I almost got whiplash. If my mom was making bacon (he he that rhymed) then that must mean…….

I ran downstairs, not caring about the bird nest on my head, or the fact that my feet where freezing from the stairs. I jumped down and was greeted with warm-soft brown  eyes. I yelled “Squirt!!!!! You came! Yay now we can drive to school together” I jumped up and down. Ok maybe im a bit overactive but hey she’s my best friend.

Chanel rubbed the back of her neck nervously. She shifted her feet un-comfortable, as my brother Jared came down the stairs. He was also in high school. Not only that but he was star lime backer of our football team. If you had not noticed Chanel and my brother kinda liked each other but wouldn’t admit it. Chanel blushed as Jared walked by her with no shirt on.

“Jared Michael Liberty! Go put on a shirt this instance there are 3 girls in the room!” My mom yelled. “But muuuum!” he whined. Oh yeah did I mention we both call our mom, mum for some reason? “No buts, you know how I feel about you and Chanel” Chanel and Jared blushed furiously and Jared went back up the stairs. When the coast was clear Chanel let out a breath of relief.

“You ready Bunny-boo?” I looked over to her already grabbing my car keys and bag. “Yeppers, um what did your mom mean by me and Jared?” I looked guiltily at her then went outside. The warm climate and humidity hit me. I really hope my ironed hair doesn’t get ruined. “May Liberty! You tell me what you told your mom right now” she glared at me, with her lazer eyes.

Oh god anything but the eyes please lord! I sighed “Gosh what is with the full names today! And to answer your question I might have let it slipped when we were at the bowling ally. You know cuz’ you and Jared were holding hands and smiling really goofy, Why wont you people date already!” Her gaze softened, then blushed furiously.

“I don’t like him okay…..” she trailed off and I knew she was blushing harder, if possible. “Oh please you both clearly have a thing for each other…….. that or he’s trying to get you in bed” I chuckled knowing that’s not true. He might me Mr. Popular but trust me he’s not a player.

Chanel glared at me and I just started the engine. I started backing out of the driveway when I noticed a familiar car on the rode but I shook the feeling off. I was finally starting Senior Year and he was not going to ruin it, no matter what. Little did i know he was basically going to be knocking on my heart.

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So what did you guys think?!? better that the original or worse? 

If you spotted a mistake please point it out. thank you.

Anyways heres a family story:

I was walking home from school when i see someone walking towards me. so i speed up.

As i near my house i see the person is still following me. I take a deap berth and rush up the steps towards my house. I feel the person following and then touch my shoulder.

I jumped and kicked the person were the sun does not shine. Guy or Girl we all know it hurts when we get hit down there.

I turn to look at the person and smile sheepishly.

It was my older brother Erick