The Disabled Girl and the Player **REWRITE**

Rewrite

Hello my Peaches!!!!!

OMG! It's been so long, but I'm back. Things have been really crazy and I wasn't in the best mindset. I've just struggled a lot in high school (mental crisis) and then ended up transitioning to my last year of high school which I had college applications to worry about. Then, my last 2 months of senior year of high school and whole year of my freshmen year of college was in quarantine and all online. It was a lovely first experience I guess.

I first want to start off by thanking all the readers who have stuck by this story. Many of you have provided major support and I've seen so much lovely comments (they always make my day). I have also received many enlightening comments. I want to give you all the best, which is why I have some big news.

I've been thinking that I need to rewrite this story because I've been looking back at this piece of writing and I think that there is a lot of things that I could change, a lot of things that I could better write. There are several reasons to this thought.

First of all, this writing really makes no sense. I remember trying to incorporate a lot of details into my writing, but those details add nothing to the story. The story has no real plot and flow. I remember that when I started writing this, I just thought of a middle portion that was interesting to write about, but I never planned how to start or end this, so it's just a lot of events that don't make sense or fit into the story because they were randomly thrown in.

Next, I was also really insensitive. I talked about a lot of sensitive topics, but never touched on it more than the name. I want to talk about real issues and have real facts in my story and not bullshit. I've decided that I'll only talk on topics that I'll elaborate on and not only scratch the top of and discard after one use. This includes the topic of disability, which many people have helped provide me information with, so I can better write this story.

Lastly, the characters are really inconsistent. There isn't much plot to this story so there isn't much that can help with character development. I've added a lot of last minute "plot" that just made this story chaotic. I want to change that and hope to develop an actual storyline. For that, I've started a story board. I've tried to incorporate as many parts of the original story into this new one, but I guess I'll have to see how this plays out when writing to change the story accordingly.

Because there is going to be a rewrite, all the old chapters, including the extras, have been taken down. I don't have a beginning date and an updating schedule yet, but I'll try to stay consistent with a schedule soon and let you guys know.

Again, thank you guys for sticking with this story so far and being so patient with me now.

Sincerely,
Roni😛

P.S. As an Asian American, I just realized how much diversity this story is lacking. Where's the flavor in this?! Man, all those years as a kid seeing only blond hair and blue eyes in picture books have really dulled my sense (not that they're ugly, just why are these standards, which shouldn't even exist, so Eurocentric). Where's the representation? In my rewrite, I'll try my best to incorporate more diversity.