Brutal Assassin's "Snow's Story"

Chapter 1 [Beginning]

Snowclaw(POV)

It was like any other day. Me and my mentor Meereswelle went in the forest to do some training on my last day of being an apprentice. I'm going to be a warrior very soon and I can't wait to tell my friend Abendmond! I smiled and ran with my mentor to the place where he wanted to go. "Ohhhhh Abendmond would be so jealous"  I thought and imagined her face while, I tell her that I'm a warrior now.

Me and Meereswelle arrived at the place and he asked me how good I could fight. Actually I'm not sure if I fight good and fair. Sometimes there is something like ......uh....idk.....It's just that I feel something rising in me. Meereswelle still waited for an answer so I said: "Of course I fight good".

Suddenly we both heard a noise. It sound like someone or something is shouting. Meereswelle rose his head and said to that I should stay where I was and that he will go and look what happened.

Meereswelle (POV)

I walked further and further into the green bushes. I actually didn't feel very good with leaving my apprentice behind, but he shouldn't get involved. The shouting suddenly stopped and I only heard the rustle of the leaves and the singing of birds. I got a feeling that something is wrong. Why would the shouting suddenly stop?

As I walked near the place where the shouting came from, I saw nothing! The only thing there was, was a puddle of blood on the grey stone. So the shouting must have come from a fight! But when there's blood, there should also be someone dead or hurt! Behind me the bushes started to rustle and I saw green eyes staring at me.

In an instant someone jumped on my back and slashed his claws through my backfur. I tried to scream but no  sound came out of my mouth. The person on my back pushed me down to the ground and put his teeth on my neck. I used my back legs and pushed him of me but he already bit me in the throat. It was not a very big wound so I tried to fight him. I know looked at the person who attacked me. It was a brown and gold wolf with green and red eyes. His ears are pressed to his head and he growled in anger. I used the opportunity and jumped on him with bared teeth and tried to get to his neck or belly but he gave me a hit with the front paw and I stumbled back. "Ha what a fool you are haha, your friend over there couldn't stop me so don't even try" he said with an evil smile and blood leaking from his mouth. His eyes wandered over to me glowing with bloodlust and anger. "What....W..what is your name" I asked full of fear. "AHH you wanna know MY NAME??? HA my name is SPITZSCHWEIF" he said and jumped to my throat. In a fast motion he rammed his teeth in my throat and ripped him out. I only noticed unbearable pain and a leak of oxygen. I couldn't breath and slowly everything went black.

No one's (POV)

Spitzschweif saw how the body of the other wolf got limp. He got over to the body and laughed. With his paw, he shoved the body behind the bushes and washed his paws in the nearby river.

In the meantime Snowclaw got suspicious. His mentor wasn't coming back and he feared that something might had happened. The shouting also stopped a while ago. Meereswelle told him to stay where he was but he doesn't care now. It's more important to hell Meereswelle if something had happened.

Snowclaw(POV)

Something was wrong I could feel it. I just hoped Meereswelle is still healthy. I slowly went the way where Meereswelle went. The bushes rustled  and I got a little nervous. Suddenly a strong smell of Iron hit my nose. The wind must have blown it over to me, but where does the smell come from. I followed the smell and got to a place with a smal river and stones. As I walked over to the river, I saw a red liquid on the stone. It smells strong like the Iron scent that I followed. I got closer and closer and that's when I noticed that it was blood. Someone had a fight over here. "Please Meereswelle..... please be alive" I thought and looked at my surroundings. A body was nowhere to be seen so maybe the person got attacked but not killed. In the distance I saw a path of blood going right into the bushes. I decided that I should take a look at it and went over to the bushes. Gently I shoved the bushes to the side and I couldn't believe what I saw there.

Meereswelle laid in there with a sliced open throat and marking of a fight. I closed my eyes for the terrible sight  and slowly spoke: "may you know be at a better place"

I knew what I had to do now!

I TAKE REVENGE

AN
So the first chapter is here :D How was it??? Was it ok to read or should I change something ??? Did I wrote anything wrong or something ????
If you find something pls tell me :D

Have a nice Lockdown week

-Feuerstern301/SnowWingX