So after reading some of the comments and reading the chapters again I've realized that I've buggered up a bit and I've also sped up far to quickly and I've got a lot of inconsistencies.
So I'm opening the proverbial floor so to speak to anyone who wishes to take over this book and do it some justice.
If you want to take it please let me know.
I feel I need to brush up a bit on my writing skills again so I'll be focusing on other things
That's all my little Ravens
YOU ARE READING
The Slytherin King(WBWL)/ Discontinued
FanfictionHadrian Rene Potter, the older brother of The Boy-Who-Lived. Forgotten the moment his brother was hailed as the saviour of the wizarding world. Cast aside and keeping to himself in the west wing of Potter Manor, He went through 6 of his 7 years at H...