Name: Asterleaf
Very nice name.
Fur color: Black tabby
Nice.
Eye color: Green eyes
Alright.
Injuries: Blind in due to badger attack
In which eye was Asterleaf blind?
Father: Name - Spideracorn
Cool name!
Spideracorn is a little, lithe tom. His fur is ginger and cream. It is shaggy and extremely long. He has a circular face with large green eyes.
Very descriptive. I love how you described his fur and his face.
Mother - Basics
Name: Shellacorn
Nice. I like how it is similar to Spideracorn!
Shellacorn is a very large, muscular she-cat. Her fur is white, with black patches. It is dull and very short. She has a triangular face with large sky blue eyes.
She sounds very pretty.
Brother - Name: Dewpetal
Pretty name!
Dewpetal is a massive, sturdy tom. His fur is a pale brown with a mackerel tabby pattern, with a white belly and white feet. It is rough and extremely long. He has a triangular face with large olive eyes.
Wow! I bet he is a great warrior (If he is one)!
Brother - Name: Horseleaf
Nice.
Horseleaf is a very small, slim tom. His fur is sandy with a rosette tabby pattern. It is silky and very short. He has a triangular face with circular deep blue eyes.
A rosette tabby pattern. Nice!
Sister - Basics
Name: Rapidspeck
I like the name!
Rapidspeck is a big, well-muscled she-cat. Her fur is pale tawny, with a white muzzle and white heart-shaped splashes. It is somewhat spiky and short. She has a round face with narrow copper eyes.
Cool! I've never heard of copper eyes before.
Mate - Name: Kestrelwhisker
I really like the name.
Kestrelwhisker is a little, wiry tom. His fur is fawn and grey with a rosette tabby pattern, with white feather-shaped patches and a white face. It is dull and very short. He has a square face with round green eyes.
Feather-shaped patches!
Kits - Name: Robinkit
Okay.
Robinkit is a large, lithe she-cat. Her fur is a rich black with a spotted tabby pattern, with a white underbelly. It is ragged and very short. She has a circular face with small blue-green eyes. She has a throaty voice and a fruity scent. Robinkit has one hooked tooth. She is considered average-looking by most, especially in others.
Wow! *speechless*
Clan Backstory - found as a kit. Normal apprentice life. One battle. Other than that a peaceful life.
Not very descriptive...
Authors note: I don't know if Asterleaf is a tom or a she-cat. What is her rank? I would've liked to know a bit more about his/her backstory though...
