Look y'all I'm sorry for my last couple of stories! Bc u guys clearly hate them! My first story was bad bc it was my first fucking story!! If u don't like how I write then just stop commenting things like that on my page and just leave! Instead of bringing others down try and give constructive criticism! U guys make me want to quit! And that's why I took a very long break! So if u have an issue with that than just leave thx