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Elizabeth was walking to school, slowly kicking a piece of rubbish.
Mumbling to herself she bumped into someone. Gemma Styles.
"Hey Gemma." I said a bit annoyed.
I kinda wanted to be alone.
"Hey Liz, how are ya little one?" She asked in her beautiful British accent.
"Please stop calling me little one?"
"And I'm good I guess."
We kept walking in silence.
"I saw Harry the day before he left for London.." I said quietly.
"Yeah I miss having his bad cooking." Gemma laughed quietly.
It was weird hearing that laugh again. The were so close I wonder what happened.
They walked to school and parted their different ways.
Elizabeth saw her two best friends, Jack and Michelle.
"Hiya, Lizza!" Shouted Michelle.
"Stop yelling people who live on the moon can hear you!" Called Elizabeth.
"Is Harry not coming to school," asked Jack.
Elizabeth shrugged it off and went to class.
First was English. Everyone hates it. No one likes Ms Trivonskie. She's a bitch.
I can't stop thinking about Harry.. It's been 2 weeks since he's left and I'm nothing without my best friend.
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"Elizabeth!" My mum called rather loudly.
"Get out of bed, it's 7:00 at
Night!!"
"Ight!" I yelled angrily.
I picked out some ripped jeans and a bright blue shirt saying 'nothing is impossible'. We are having guests over. Great. Just great.
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They all arrived and we are welcoming them into our house. My other two best friends are here Michelle and Jack.
Michelle is wearing a navy blue dress, which falls just higher then her knees. It compliments her jet black hair and stunning blue eyes.
Meanwhile Jack is wearing, some jeans and a shirt with a animal on it. His brown hair is all gelled up and weird.
I never understood why boys have gel in their hair, but I suppose they wonder why we girls were makeup!
"Eli, you look hot!" Jack said with a smirk.
"Oh shut up why don't ya?" I retorted back.
We all walked out the back and say on the swings. I had four swings in my backyard. One for me, Jack, Michelle and...Harry. I'm almost in tears thinking about him.
"Lizzy, Harry.. He isn't in Manchester anymore is he?" asked Michelle.
"N-no he isn't.." A tear slipped from my eye.
Jack walked over and embraced me. I swear I was bawling my eyes out because he was cooing in my ear trying to calm me down.
I started to scream!
"Why does this need to be done to me?!" I yelled on the top of my lungs.
