At the entrance the children stood quietly in front of the factory. Sally was dressed in her beautiful pink Lolita dress, and Bella Swan, who was next to her begin making a racket. She yelled to dad" When will I get to go in? Make it snappy, idiot." Her dad spoke" Sure dear. Wait first."Sally's mum spoke" Be a good girl, Sally."
It was time for them to go in the factory.Sayori showed up, she was a young female who had straight long blue hair, a floral t-shirt and a long denim skirt. She spoke" Hello children. Wanna start the tour?" Sally and the children nodded and the introduced themselves. Breena spoke" Hey Miss Wonka, I am a candy-queen." Bree spoke" I am the video-game queen. I hate your chocolate. " Bella Swan spoke" I love your chocolate! It is so tasty but it is too hard." Sally was the only polite one. She spoke" hello miss Wonka. I am Sally. Nice to meet you." Miss Wonka smiled.
Miss Wonka announced" We are here at the Chocolate Room!" Sally trilled" Miss Wonka! It is amazingly beautiful!" Breena and Bree has to admit it is pretty because they felt it the same. Sayori Wonka spoke" you can eat anything you like here. Everything is edible." So Sally rushed off to try some sugar flowers, Breena eat some cream from trees and smeared chocolate on her dirty t-shirt. Bree was being naughty and stole Sally's sugar flowers. The greedy girl, Bella Swan ate sugar flowers, chocolates, gum, edible grass and wanted to try the chocolate river's chocolate." Yandere Swan, her mother spoke" No! no! no! Bella Swan, come here!" But Bella Swan ignored her mum and continued drinking the chocolate from the river. SPLASH! Bella Swan fell in the river.
The Ommpa Loompas preformed a song:
Bella Swan, Bella Swan,
the greedy little candy-queen.
who taught her to be so greedy,
doting dad and spoiling helper,
but dear children be alarmed:
Bella Swan will survi—vie—
Who made her this fat,
her pretty looks disappeared.
We have to save little Bella Swan
Or else it will be too late.
Sayori Wonka spoke" Maybe the tour has to go without poor little Bella who needed rescuing.
The next room is the invention room. There are big production lines with lots of different candies. Sayori Wonka spoke" This new pinkapretty cupcakes are new in my factory. They have a beautiful pink colour and it will not be too sweet and it will last forever and not go rotten. Who would want one? " Sally spoke" Me. I would love cupcakes."
So Miss Wonka gave Sally cupcakes and she tried them. Miss Wonka spoke" This invention is called The Yummy Gum. You will not eat anything because the whole gum is your all days meals. Made for rushing students and gentleman and ladies who go to work and have no time to eat.
Breena spoke" then let me try it. I can be a white mouse ." So as Breena has the gum in her mouth, she spoke" I felt toast! and noodles! rice! Eggs! Oh...raspberry pie!" Miss Wonka's eyes went large. She said" Oh no. The problem is in that part!" Sally spoke" Breena is turning red!" Breena spoke" Oh No!"
The ommpa loompas sang again:
Dear little Breena-Chan,
this gentle girl she seems so cute,
but underneath she is competitive,
doesn't admit she loses,
Her parents should very much regret that they,
spoiled her and preened her,
if we can't her back to normal size,
it serves her right.
Sayori Wonka spoke" OK. Let's move on shall we?"
Next came to the turtle's room. The turtles are zipping up candy bags, and Batty was determined to get one of these. Her mum spoke" I am sorry Batty dear, but I can't get you one of these. They belong to Miss Wonka." Batty pouted angrily" I don't care. Ask Miss Wonka to give me one!"
Miss Wonka shook her head. "No, little girl." Batty was angry enough and she yelled" OK! If you stupid grown ups don't get me one, I get it myself!" And Batty swung the gate open and leaped down the stairs, she wanted a turtle so she grabbed a cute one, but the turtle was angry! Ten of them pinned her body on the ground, twenty of them pinned her legs and arms on the ground and they thought she was trash and dumped her in the rubbish chute.
The Ommpa Loompas preformed their songs:
Ahhh,ahhh,
Batty, Batty the little brute,
has just gone down the smelly place.
down she will meet smelly stuff,
Which is just as rotten as her personality,
a fish head,
a steak that non people liked.
Who provided to her any need,
and now made his family homeless,
Doting dad and spoiling mum,
spoils the girl,
bad and bad,
If we kick him down the chute,
he will descents his daughter.
YOU ARE READING
Sally and The Chocolate Factory
ContoUnlike the original version, rich, beautiful, gentle Sally and 4 girls are going to the chocolate factory. But then other girls are spoiled, rude, violent and bratty.
