This is the continued part of my fanfiction of the amazing movie - Four Brothers. It mainly focuses on Louisa Mercer the adopted Daughter of Evelyn Mercer and The younger adopted Sister of Bobby, Jeremiah snd Angel and Jack Mercer.
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Louise is sitting on the couch with Caleb as they are sitting on the couch watching television when Jack walks in and asks "You ready yet Sis?" Louise smiles up at Jack and stands up and says "Sure" and a heavily pregnant Louise stands up and Caleb asks "You guys need a lift to the store?" Jack shakes his head as he puts on his jacket and replies "Nah, I'm gonna drive us" when suddenly there's gunshots get fired at the house and Jack shouts "Lou! Get down!" Louise crouches down below the window as gunfire shoots through the house. Louise shouts "BOBBY?! ANGEL?!" Bobby runs downstairs with a shotgun and Angel follows behind him with a handgun and Bobby says "Louise stay here" and Louise screams as the gunshots fire through the window. Jack and Caleb and Bobby and Angel run outside and Louise shouts "GO AWAY!". A moment later the gunshots stop and Bobby shouts "JACK?!" Louise carefully stands up and she looks through the broken window and her face drops as she sees Bobby and Angel and Caleb surrounding Jack who is laying on the ground. Louise runs out of the house and towards her older Brothers and Fiance and Bobby cries "No, Jack dont do this" and Angel looks towards Louise who is running towards them and he stands up and Louise shouts "JACKIE?! JACK NO!" but Angel holds her back and she hysterically cries as she looks down at her dead Brother.
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Its ten minutes later and the police and ambulance have arrived outside as the Mercer's are outside and Bobby and Angel and Louise and Caleb are sitting outside The Mercer Residence as they all look to Jack who is a black bag on a gurney getting wheeled away by the coroner and Jeremiah gets out of his car and runs up to his family and asks frantically "What happened?! Where's Jack?!" Louise says as she stares in a trance "He's de-dead" and Bobby says "This was Sweet, he done this" Jeremiah asks "What?" Angel says "A crew shot up our house and killed our Jack! Bobby's right this was Victor Sweet" and Caleb looks to Bobby as Bobby says "Y'know what, he's gonna pay him and his crew" and Terrence Green walks over and he says sadly "I'm sorry for your loss, Jack was a good kid" and Bobby nods and says "Yeah, he was...the best" and Louise sniffles and Terrence looks to Louise and asks "You okay Louise?" Louise looks up to Terrence with red rimmed eyes and says "My Mother's House has just been shot at and My Big Brother is dead and you're asking me if I'm alright?" Louise stands up and scoffs in disbelief and mutters "Idiot" and she storms into the house and Jeremiah looks to Caleb and Caleb says "I'm gonna go check on her" and Bobby says "Yeah you do that!". Terrence says "Sorry guys for your loss and I didn't mean to cause offence to Louise" and Bobby shakes his head and says "Don't take it personal Green, she's just hurting right now" and Terrence nods.
