(I only own the 10 commandment 2nd generation wich are listed and described in my oc's book.I don't own any other characters accept for shea's mom who is also helbram's sister who I have created.Non of the other characters are mine)this is the story...
Your POV. I jump towards mael not even thinking just pure anger for the archangels nearly killing all of the commandments accept for myself.I can't see anything because my eyes are full of tears and anger. All I see is a blurred light from the corner of my eye and I feel nothing but burning and pain. "AGHHHHHH" I scream in pain as loud as I possibly can. Maels pov She jumps towards me.I summon my sun ability making a huge sun appear and all I hear is sheas screams and I loud bang.I snap out of what seemed like a trance.I don't remember anything but ludociel trying to comfort me.I hear someone's screams of pain and agony. I sense a magic that is demonic yet fairy like.It's like Salem's magical presence almost. "Wait ITS HER!" I fly around trying to find her. I stumble a pon an injured being.All I sense is a magic similar to Salem's.I kneel down to see is she's ok. I hear someone walking up behind me "What the hell did you do to me?!" I say in an aggressive and furious tone. "I know you would-" I cut him off aggravated and pissed "answer the question,WHAT DID YOU MAKE ME DO!?!?" I say in pure rage. "I made you attack her."The flash grace says in a firm tone. I place my hand on her Shoulder "schhhhhh" I hear her wince in pain. Your POV: I slam into the ground and scream in pain.I roll onto my side.
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I loose the ability to move or even open my eyes. "Fuck,it really hurts." I hear muffled footsteps and what sounds like talking but I can't be sure. I sense something in front of me as I lie on the ground in pain.What or whoever is in front of me all I can sense from them is pure anger.I feel something all a sudden on my shoulder and I wince is pain as whatever it is,is right where a burn mark is."I have to keep fighting!" I say internally not wanting to give up now.I try to move but I can't it hurts to bad. "Why can't I move?" I can't move,use my power,or even open my eyes. Try to move my wings but I feel nothing. Suddenly I feel myself slip into a calm state. It's like a dream I loose all sense of feeling and hearing. Ludociels POV: I stand behind my brother that's kneeled down in front of the injured notorious commandment of truth Shea Alinia .She's known for how brutal she is but never killing her victims.She has burns,cuts,gashes,and bruises all over.I can tell that Mael is pissed,I put him in a trance to make him attack Shea because I know he wouldn't hurt her without the trance over him. "Why did you make me hurt her?" I don't answer I just look at the ground trying not to look at him "Are you gonna answer me or not?" He says absolutely furious and enraged. He looks over his shoulder and his eyes are full of rage and his eyebrows are furrowed. "I knew you wouldn't attack her unless I did" He quickly turns his head back around towards Shea knowing I was right but still furious. I look around for Tariel and Sariel but I don't see them,they've probably already went back to base.I finally fight up the courage to look at my brother his hand is on her shoulder.He's careful not to touch her burn marks. Mael's POV: I sit next to Shea,infuriating of what my brother did to me and what I did to her.I pick her up,I feel her heart beat in my arms.I sigh knowing that Shea is still alive.I walk past my brother not giving him a glance I just keep walking.Then I stretch my Time skip I see Tariel and Sariel after I land but I look away and ignore them.I walk to an oasis and I set her down near the water.I heal her to the best of my ability and hope it's enough.
694 words A/n HIE so first of all Thankyou for 55 reads like WHAT I never thought I would get to that amount.I know it's not a lot but I do appreciate it.I started writing this fic because meal doesn't get enough love.One last thing I promise.I'm sorry for not updating in a while I either didn't have the motivation or didn't have time I promise that I will try to update more often and please give me tips and tricks on how to improve my writing skills XOXOXO C0lnex-San
