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Nyonika - Pagal hai tu ? Haan matlab bada hogya hai toh kuch bhi karega ?
Ek baar theek ho ja, ek jhor ka thapaad lagaungi dekhna ( Still crying)
While Sakshi too wipes her tears.
Sakshi- Yeh kya hai Manik ? Haan mera Manu toh aisa kabhi bhi kerta .... Kya hogya beta , kyu kiya aisa (sobbing)
Manik didn't know what to tell them , he was just silent and wasn't even meeting anyone's eyes.
What to say?
That he is not a good friend to Nandani.
To say he is such a bad son that he disappointed his parents.
Such a bad son that , Sakshi and Ram will now never thrust him for their daughter again.
And most important , he is Worst lover of Nandani, who just made her cry .
What will he say that , he felt it easy to die rather than living a life without Nandani's love .
That his guilt overpowered all his senses and all he could see is that he is just unwanted person in everyone's life .
That he is so weak emotionally as well as physicaly that he decided to put full stop in his life.
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Even after trying so much when Manik was not saying anything , everyone decided to give him sometime .
But they made sure that , he is not left alone.
Nyonika and Sakshi with their respective husbands goes to near Mandir , to pray for Manik's well being.
While Nandani , Navya and Cabir were with Manik.
Manik was doing nothing but his eyes were fixed on Nandani.
If she moves , his eyes follows her.
Cabir was noticing all this and shakes his head .
C(pov)- yeh toh filmo se bhi jayda cliched wala love hai bhai.
Matlab , kya bagwaan ji ab bas karo milwa do dono ko, nhi toh pata nhi kya kya karenge dono.
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After 15 mins----
Nandani receives a call and she moves near window and talks for good 10 mins...
Manik was confused, with whom she is talking for so long ?
Jab se aai hai abhi tak toh sirf mujhe dekh rhi thi , ab kya hua...?
And next second she cuts the call and whispers something to Cabir and Navya and gives Manik a neutral look and moves out of the room.
Manik got panicked , she is leaving ?
Is she leaving me for forever?
Cabir noticed all panicked look on Manik's face , he was tensed , confused , hurt and what not.
But again he said nothing !
Cabir has never seen this weak Manik , who is not fighting back at all .
He can feel that Manik wants to say his feelings to Nandani , but he is not expressing himself , he is just not fighting back !
And he is definitely concerned about this , what if he again decides to do something , because he is definitely weak emotionally as well as physically.
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It was night when Nandani returns to Manik's ward with dinner , which she herself prepared for him.
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