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First of all, here are the last participants for the awards and your status:


Wings Of Love by PriscillaYiadom4

Title: 9/10 :Good and interesting, fits the genre and fits the story but you could have a better choice for the title Cover:10/10: AMAZING! The cover is great it fits the genre and you made edits which you put in your book which was amazing Characters 15/20: the characters are good yet in some places they lack information and clarity Plot: 12/30 I'm sorry but there isn't any plot it's feels like your reading a series of unrelated event. However the events in themselves are well written. Grammar:10/20:The grammar was really good and it was distracting from the story, you made a lot of mistakes, especially in dialogue but you made progress through the book which I appreciate. How well thought out it is 6/10:Again this is because the story doesn't flow and sometimes it was a bit hard to understand how it all related but inside the chapters in themselves the pacing was good and the chapters were a nice size which made them enjoyable to read. 62/100: Overall there where many grammatical mistakes which I hope you can fix in the future but I think you have a lot of potential and so does your story. You need to take a step back and figure out where you're going wrong but once you do that you will be amazing!

The Different Mixtures by Shaunatay

Title 10/10: Amazing it fits the story perfectly and it makes you want to read the story Cover:8/10 Good i feel like you still could do better, it's a good cover but in my opinion putting all the main characters on the cover took a little bit of magic away from it. Characters: 18/20:Again the characters where really good, I love how you gave us an incite on they're backstories however I think it would have been even better if we could have seen their relationships build up and develop Plot: 24/30 It's good and I liked it though some of the events seemed a little unrelated but overall it was very good and you understand the dangers quickly Grammar 18/20:Good I disagreed on the choice of words in some areas How well though out it is 8/10: It was good in some places i thought it was a little quick in other a little fast but that's my opinion 84/100 Overall this story was really good and I enjoyed reading it ,the story in itself was good however I disagreed with you in some tiny areas but as a reader I really loved reading your book!

Off Limits by ever_after04

Title 10/10: The title was great it's intriguing and fits the story very well Cover 8/10: The cover was good yet I feel like it missed some incite of the story Characters 17/20 The characters were good and you could see development but in some areas I didn't really understand what was happening with them Plot 25/30 The plot was good and intriguing , however I feel like you have the potential to do better Grammar 18/20: The grammar was good there where no major mistakes just some little tiny errors in places which don't really matter too much How well thought out it is 8/10: I really liked it ,it was paced very well however in some places it felt like you were dragging it out a little but it wasn't very noticeable. 86/100 Overall it's a great story and I really enjoyed reading it, there where not many mistakes and as a reader you wouldn't even notice them but as a judge it's my job to analyze very little thing. The story was amazing and I was really happy to judge it.

Alphas by M1Y7S1E3RY

Title 9/10: Good but could be better, more intriguing Cover 9/10: Suit the book yet could be betterCharacters 20/20: Great very 3 dimensional with character development Plot 28/30: Good in some areas lacked explanations Grammar 18/20: Good, I disagreed on the choice of words in some place How well thought out it is 10/10: Great, and paced very well.94/100 Overall I loved the story, it was almost perfect and just had some tiny flaws and errors in places


Now those are the last people! So here are the placings!

1st place: Nightingale by sunbeam1997

2nd place: A Silver Bloom by BhumikaBV

3rd place: Alphas by M1Y7S1E3RY

4th place: A Black Freaks Charm by papililgirl8


Thank you and happy reading:

PS. We are closing the awards for good. if anyone is willing to take over please PM me and I will give you the username and password. Of course, you can change them when you want, but we also need someone who is willing to create the stickers.

Bye and have a good rest of your day.

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