since this a draft pleas allow me to write in horrible english :)
mistakes like pleas shud be overlooked cuz I need to type fast
hehe
anyways here's how it'll work: ill put bold where I feel need improvement and those areas shud be criticized more umm harshly? what the adj for criticize? also, sometimes I won't know which word will fit the best soo :')
and the rest of the places tell me how I can change it as you see fit (in the comments).
things to look for: (in order of importance)
1. writing style- i feel like my writing isn't in the same style as yours/shannon's, since you're writing you'll know...
for example: Instead of "Pardon?" maybe something like "What?" or "I'm sorry?"
2. places where I should use other words to make it sound natural and not stiff
eg: agitatedly --> annoyedly (tho tbh even that sounds wrong EEK again, you'll know :D)
3. grammatical mistakes
And yeah that's it! it would be amazing A-MAY-ZING if you could help!
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Randomenter t your own risk: this is a draft of my book MAINLY FOR EDITING PURPOSES. if you want the whole book spoiled for u then go ahead.
