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  • Dedicated to Criminal Minds
                                    

This is dedicated to an episode of Criminal Minds, it stuck with me and I just had to write something out of it.  I was going to write it exacty like the episode, but then as I was developing the characters I decided on an alternate ending.  It has a lot of differences Iike the girls names, and other stuff but the plot is pretty similar.  

When it's the soccer part, hang in there it takes up a lot of it chapter but I couldn't find a way around it.  It'll get better don't worry!

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My fingers gently touched the sleek, black weapon. I closed my long lashes trying to block the threat of tears streaming down my face. This was the only way. The only way they could live. My mind searched aimlessly for any way out other than this way, but I already knew it was useless. All I had to do was pull the trigger, in the movies it was always painless. The person would pull the trigger and that's it, right? No pain, just relief that my loved ones will have a chance. I thrust the gun up before I can think of a reason not to.

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Iris Matthews POV 

The ball thrummed against my foot as I raced down the neatly trimmed field. All I had to do was get 20 more yards and I'll win the game! I'll give us a chance to win the game and make it to Finals.

Our school, the one that comes in last every year. Our colors were the average red, black, and white.  So original right?  We came in last every year, but this year with Danielle, Lilith and I on the team we'll win.

We were the ultimate trio. We worked amazing on the field. And coincidentally we were best friends. No one would think of us individually, they'd think of us as a group.  We were so different we fit perfectly.

I was now only about 5 yards away but a defender was in front of me, blocking me from the huge goal that could hold wonders for me. I swung my head to the left and see Lilith, her blonde hair and bobbing head was yelling,

"Here!" Begging for the ball.

Her wide blue eyes were trustworthy and I knew she could make the shot. But the truth was, I didn't want to give up my 15 minutes of fame.

My instincts obviously disagreed because a few seconds later I felt my footwind up and kick the ball directly to the short little legs belonging to Lilith.

Immediately she dribbled around the useless defender and blasted the ball to the goal. The goal that held so many possibilities for me betrayed me and was passed onto Lilith. I ran to back Lilith up in case she lost the ball, which I was secretly hoping she would.

The ball that was so loyal to me now looked sinister as it soared right over the auburn haired goalie, who looked shocked that she missed by such a short distance. But no one could have saved that perfect shot, the crowd was yelling "o0o0o0o0ooo!" in suspence.

Lilith's shot was perfect. 

No one will ever understand how such a small body could hold such skill. Lilith was so sweet, and small. No one could ever deny that. I highfived her as we ran to mid-field, I gave her a half-hearted smile and returned to my position at right forward.

DanieIIe Forresters POV

Iris's pass to Lilith was flawless and I think everyone could see that the assist was just beautiful in general. I was defence carefully covering number 9, who I could only remember because of her neon cletes, flashy headband and bright red hair, when I saw the goal that won us the game.

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