A NEW HOPE (steve saga) {Discontinued}(sorry)

ch2

" Hey rainbow we are at our stop let's go," Galaxy said with a smile, " right let's go find Sabre"
*outside of the Galaxy Dimension*
" here we are but we are not close to Sabre" " that's okay Galaxy let's walk around and see if any of us can feel saber or find him"
*1 hour later*
"Uhhhhhhhhhhhhhh we have been walking for hours can we stop and get a sandwich?" Rainbow takes a deep breath in sighs " Galaxy staber might be in danger and you are worried about a sandwich?!" Galaxy nods, " fine we need a break anyways but let's go up to that tree for shade" " as long as i get my sandwich". As soon as they reach the tree Galaxy left to get a sandwich and rainbow sat down under the tree. Rainbow looks up at the sky and see something in the sky with fireworks and wings "LUCAS!?" Can you hear him screaming like he lost control of flying "rainbow watch out !!!" Just as Rambo moved out of the way Lucas ran into the top of the tree and fell out of the tree. "Lucas are you ok?!" " yeah I'm okay I just logged on and I see the rainbow town all destroyed and on fi- wait where is Sabre?" Just as Lucas said that Galaxy came out with sandwiches and said " he's gone we stink nightmare talk him somewhere" Lucas lock shock " Sabre is gone is he ok!?" Galaxy said with his mouth full " we don't know yet but we are trying to look for h-" " Lucas we are trying but there is this thing Galaxy gave me it says when did nightmare comes the heroes friend will come and bring a New Hope but he has to be careful or he will die we think it's about saber and how he was this hero but about him dying we don't know yet" Lucas looked down a little mad and sad " we need to find him..." rainbow look up "we will don't worry."
*with sabre*
*opens eyes* where am I why am I in a tube where is Rainbow as saber looked around he saw machines and a broken test tube. Where am I I need to get back to Rainbow I need to see if he's okay I hope nothing bad happened to him. Just as they were looked forward he sees nightmare face to face "ah sabre good to see your up... you will notice that you can't speak.. that's because of the tube thing for you to breathe but you will also notice that your friends are not here... They're looking for you but they won't not for another couple of days" then at night Mariah stood Frozen Sabre didn't know why until he looked behind nightmare NC avoid Sabre didn't understand why nightmare froze up and his eyes looks down saver followed nightmares eyes and sees a sword coming from a nightmare, Sabre I bang on the glass boy looks up and Nightmare looks up Mouths " your friends are coming to help you escape just hold on a little longer" Then nightmare fell to the ground void walks around Sabres tube "hahaha I finally got you well nightmare did but oh well..." void walks away from the tube and goes to the broken test tube, " I had many failed tests but I won't failed this one". Void walks out of the testing room and puts in a code. Sabre looks down and sees nightmare getting up, Neymar hold this stab wound and tell saber " I need to go void things he killed me but no he was closed I need to go find her friends they can help me and I will lead them to you straight right here".

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Hey so this is ch2 sorry if some of the words didn't make sense I have a chapter 3 written down but I could use your guys's input tell me what you guys think