A Twist of Fate (1D series - Book one) by JossieLeia

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A Twist of Fate (1D series - Book one) by  JossieLeia

My mother is what you would call a cougar! She goes out every night going to clubs. Getting drunk till she can't feel a thing. And bringing a boy home every time. And who is there to look after her every time she does this. Me her daughter. I mean shouldn't I be the one doing this? Shouldn't I be the one partying? Being reckless? It's like shes the daughter and Im the mum! Oops sorry i should introduce myself.... Hi I'm Mia Cole. I am the towns whore's daughter unfortunately. One night my mum goes to the club. She doesn't come home till 2:30 in the morning. I can hear her and the guy she brought home! I wake up the next morning to find out that it is none other than Harry Styles himself. His hair is ruffled and he has no top on. Oh gosh don't tell me he did what Im thinking he did. I freeze until I hear my mothers voice. "Mia, meet my new boyfriend Harry" Oh dear lord! Help me now! What will happen when Mias mum Rachel insists they spend more time to get to know each other? How will the media effect the relationship? How do the boys feel about this relationship? What does Harry think about Mia? Will something happen between Harry and Mia?

I Will be totaly honest with this fanfic. There is soooo much things i sidn't like about it but still i couldn't stop reading it!!! There are sequils so i will say what i mean aabout whole story not just first part. Ok so:

1. Harry dated your mum!! How can you be whit him if he's dating your mum! I mean, he's having two girls in her life! Yo are sharing him dude!!! Where is your dignity buddy?? And after he had sex with reachel She accepted his apology thaaaat easy?? Seriousy? NOOO!! You can't! And later, whan she came back from america, her mom was living with Harry!!! If i were on her place i wouldnt talk to him nicely at allllll! I would be rude, or i wouldn't even talk to him. And he clled her a slut, a liar, and so many bad names and if he wants to be back with me, he would have to do muuuuuuch more things than ''I'm sorry''. I would torture him! He would be reeeeeealy sory for what he has done!! I mean how can you forgiv him that easy? I'ts unreal!

i actually can't tall what i liked but there is something special taht didn't et me stop haha. Now i want you to read it and you hae to tell me what you think! Pleaaase! Do it! Now! Thanka! Love yaah :) xxx

Reccomend me some fanfics pleasee hun! I will tell what i think! Gosh i love doing that! Byeeeee :) xxxxxxxxxx

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