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Username : the_hodophile
Story : Empire of Flames and Thorns
Genre : Action / YA
Chapters : 4 , chapter 5 being published today ( ongoing book , still writing )
Description : Lyssa Thorne, a 25 year old , trying to find her place in one of the most ruthless gangs ,The Royal Thorns . A family run gang with more power than they know what to do with. Will she take what's rightfully hers and be the leader , or will family destroy her vision and hard work? Will she prevail or will a rival gang threaten her plans to rule ? Will she successfully take over every gang , or will a love interest intervene with her life and choices ?
Warnings : mature language ( will update when book expands )
Feedback preferences : I want to improve on my characters and worldbuilding . Feedback on grammar and spelling is also welcomed. I do well with criticism , so no need to beat around the bush.
Average chapter length : 900 - 1000 ( planning on writing longer chapters , since I only started writing recently )
Reading preferences : I don't have any specific preferences . I'm open to read any book and genre.
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Username: yareid
Story: Traveler
Genre: Adventure/Friendship/Short story
4 chapters(ongoing)
Description: Jal, weighed down with guilt,a stressful college life and the pressures of trying to please his only remaining family books it to Peru, last minute. Jal, can not just acknowledge it-he has to face his wound. Alone? not quite...
Warning: Cursing(here and there)
Feedback preference: Writing crutches- (any overused words; areas that could use stronger verbs; concise word choice); Balanced with-(what did you like about my writing? Did a certain phrase/part stand out to you?); Really focus on the interaction between my characters. (what do you notice about them?); What works/dosen't
Average chapter length:407-700 words
Reading preferences:Any fiction. Likes:Fantasy/otherworldly/Apocalyptic/Comedy/short story/Soft horror/Scifi/Rom. Pretty much everything, I am open minded. Dislikes:Erotica
Will read mature content: Yes
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