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Commander Yuu
FanfictionEveryone in the imperial demon army talks about this newly amazing General, Yūichirō Ichinose. A 17 year old, who has done many good deeds, everyone admires him. Especially Mika his childhood best friend. A noble who watched Yuu for years, a terribl...
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