Pokemon Mystery Dungeon: Mirrored worlds || OLD ||

Going Forward

After a year of consideration, I think Ill rewrite most of the story, because as many writers, we change how we write. We make it different, better, more understanding and engaging. But from what I read. It seems like I wrote myself into a hole, or a dead end. I made the story progress to quickly, so because of that, it seemed like the ned was insite, rather than a few chapters down the line. The reason this happened is because as a fan who has played 4 out of the 8 games, mystery dungeons has always followed the same idea of a "Hidden" overarching villan who comes out at the mid way of the game. And as most people can probably guess that was Ax the axew. The problem I had made was his tangled backstory. But because I messed up the timing and events that took from Herman's and Haji's views, Ax ended up with a more or less broken backround. Same goes for a few of the others like Terr, Katt, Jaz, Otta, and Sylven. Looking back, I decided to go back and fix some of the writing and time structure, because originally the time setting was about 30 years after Super Mystery Dungeons on the 3DS. But the universe also is its own timeline where it combines all the games (Not Including Pokémon Mystery Dungeon DX because its a remake of Red and Blue. Witch the story of red and blue are also Cannon in here), and the Idea was that ussually be the one human becoming Pokémon idea. The problem was how it didn't explore why Ari was ablego and remake it with more context and a better story. To those who still read. Thank you for waiting and reading for so long, originally, I wanted to make this as a webtoon or youtube animated series. But because I used pokemon it would have been Nintendo Ninja'd. Witch would prevent me from continuing. I know pokemon is what gave this book more life or character to it. But I also understand that its really reasonable to be turned away from the book from the bad pacing and the way I had written it. So when Mirrored Worlds returns. This time, Ill make it a bit more comprehenable. Leave comments for me to continue. If not. This is where the story ends for Haji. And If thats how it ends, I can simply write the original ending I had in mind.