Draca: The Return

Chapter 1: First Time? + REWRITTEN VERSION

(This version you are viewing is the rewritten one, go to the end of the chapter to see the original version. I literally abandoned this old story for months lmao.)

"Guys, BE. CAREFUL."

Funboi had made it clear that he'd want this to get stuck in everyone's head. He continued,

"There could be any danger when working on a facility as big as this. For example Draca could b-"

Everyone stared at Funboi with either a look of anger, dread or shock. Draca was not well respected in this group due to her past actions, thus gaining obvious recognition between the boys and the company they work for, I.A.O.T or IAOT, the acronym stands for Internet Associated Observing Team. The company deals with anything tech related and a lot of facilities because nowadays, quite a few facilities run on tech.

The boys grabbed alarm disablers, batteries, bags of popcorn and salad. They could last days, months, years, heck, however long they needed they could for that amount of time, but if we're being realistic it wont take them a year to work on this facility, the longest they could do is six months and they'd most likely be out by then. They had all the equipment they needed but they were missing something.

"Guys I think we lost something." Yelled LunarBoi

"What did we possibly lose?" Replied Rainboi

"I think a bag is gone, it's bag that has all our flashlights, our batteries will be useless."

"We can still use them for the walkie talkies right?" RainBoi talked back and forth with LunarBoi.

"True, but what will we use for our lights?"

"I'm sure the facility has sone flashlights."

"Okay, lets move on, problem solved." FunBoi intervened.

GoldBoi was the first one to hop out of the van, carrying the food, water and the walkie-talkies in his bag. Next was LunarBoi with the batteries, alarm disablers, detectors and wires. Third was FunBoi then last was RainBoi, the two had any extra supplies needed.

Their corporation they work for I.O.T, IOT stands for Internet Observation Team, it's way past the 2000's and technology is getting out of hand so they work on making sure it's all handled and safe. They also work on many facilities since facilities are practically made out of tech nowadays. They were given a lot to work with by IOT, since this facility seems VERY, VERY, powerful. Upon entering the room they all noticed something strange with the facility.

Word count: 407

(This is the original one if you really want to see it.)

"Remember, BE CAREFUL." Funboi urged he continued to babble on with his speech. "We don't know when Dra-" a long pause lasted, Funboi didn't want to mention her. "s-  she's here." Funboi looked at Rainboi, Lunarboi and the Goldboi. Just from their faces he knew that they still remember her, he sighed and took a deep breath. "Look... I remember too... I think we all do... All I'm saying is... don't keep your guard down." They all grabbed what they needed, from batteries to alarm disablers. They could last for days, weeks even months. But they were still in horror after what she did. They stuffed all of the supply in the bags they brought, and with all the courage Lunarboi got he slowly opened the door to the facility.

Word count: 130 words (original's word count not the remake word count.)