If you are one of the 'OG' readers you might notice that I changed the plot a little because it didn't really fit for what I was trying to go. I often have a writers block so don't expect regular updates oops.
If the pacing is kinda weird, I genuinely want to apologise which leads me to my second point.
I'm prone to publishing the first version of my chapter than my proofread one which is why my proofread and edited chapters are marked with a *. This is my first book with actual explicit smut and if it's like really bad then just tell me so I don't embarrass myself.
The chapters marked with a (!) are the ones with explicit sexual stuff and I always write right at the beginning the things the following chapter will include e.g.: degradation, mention of XY, breeding kink, spit play, breathplay, etc.
First chapter changes: It was actually written in first-person perspective but the moment I discovered that people prefer the 'you'-perspective over the first-person perspective one I immediately edited the chapter.
In case you discover some accidental 'I', 'my' or 'mine' in the book then oops cuz I probably missed it.
I also changed the writing a little and corrected the grammar as well as the plot.
I'll continue editing the chapters and I'll add the things I changed right here.
bye bye <33
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FanfictionWas it the right decision to let Oikawa touch you? Because now you aren't able to get rid of the burning sensation on your skin he had left --- UNDER CONSTRUCTION‼️‼️‼️ CH.1 is proofread I do not own the haikyuu!! characters. I only own the story...
