do not be afraid of me my love

Part 3

Susan got up in the mid of the night and softly went to her sister's room and said softly "Lu wake up lets escape  form the castle ." Lucy was in deep sleep but she answered "5 minutes mum." Susan smiled softly and said "Lu it me Susan please wake up." Lucy woke up and said "what is the matter sister." Susan said "lets escape from the castle  Lu please ."  Lucy looked at her sister and said "Su we'll be caught the security is too tight." Susan said "we'll hide and sneek out Lu we won't be caught you know that I don't want to marry Peter. " Lu sighed at her sister  and got ready .

As Susan said they could get away from the castle but on their way a different prince  Rabadash who looked at Susan and  got attracted by her beauty and quickly grabbed her .  Susan shouted when he started to drag her "LET ME GO ! LUCY RUN QUICKLY AND PLEASE BRING SOME HELP "  Lucy quickly ran towards the castle and ran inside she reached Peter's and Edmund's room and banged the door .  Edmund  opened  the door sleepily as Peter sat up they saw Lucy at the door and were surprised Lucy while panting she said "Susan is ..... Susan is........." Peter asked "what happened to Susan"  Lucy finally got the courage and said "Peter Susan is in danger she is kidnapped by a prince called  Rabadash  when we tried to  escape from the castle ."  Peter  quickly grabbed his sword and said "Lucy you stay in the castle Edmund and I will go and save Susan and don't you dare to escape from the castle again. "Lucy nodded

Peter and Edmund quickly ran out mounted on their horses and speed out of the castle . By then  Rabadash  had tied  Susan to the tree and said "  Susan you are going to be mine now " .  Susan  said "Never will I be yours or anyone's " Rabadash was  close to Susan when Edmund spotted Susan and  shouted "STAY AWAY FROM HER YOU JERK." Susan saw Edmund and a older boy who she immediately recognized it as Peter and was shocked that her sister had told them to help her. Peter saw Susan in a bad condition and told his brother "Ed you go and  release Susan while I deal with this jerk" Edmund nodded  and quickly went to Susan and released her Susan thanked him . She saw Peter fighting with Rabadash and was shocked when Peter had pushed him to the ground and was about to kill him she being a gentle one ran up to him and said "Peter please stop don't be so merciless just drop it please." Peter saw Susan next to him and relaxed and said "alright lets go home." all the three went to the castle. 

When they reached the castle Lucy saw her sister and ran towards her and hugged her Susan also hugged her back and planted a kiss on her sister's  cheeck .Peter cleared his voice and brought their attention towards him and said "since you both have tried to escape the castle you both are not having your own rooms Lucy you will be with Edmund and Susan you will be with me ." Before Susan could say anything Peter took her into the room and closed the door and said "I'll discuss the matter with you later Susan for now let's  go to bed." And he pulled Susan to the bed and layed  her on the bed and put his arms around her and drifted off to sleep

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