The short stories I have written are a form of presentable work that I hope will be followed by constructive criticism. As a non-native English speaker, I may be missing out on a lot of details on how to properly word a story or make a more impactful scene, or any other details that don't come to mind. Feel free to share your full and honest opinions about my writings!
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Colors and scenery
Short StoryOur unnamed protagonist is in the car with a driver, who's identity seems to be of no importance. The boy's interest is instead shifted to the view outside. He notices something unnerving when they drive up a slope.