So, no one has said anything...not even my friends that I know read my stuff. So, Im going to do things my own way now. I have started writing some stuff and am just gonna do the one shots thing but in a different writing style. Im going to write in almost a play like format. Everyone who has started reading my new stuff as like beta testers likes it better that way because it's more organized that way. So, this story is done, but I might try to rewrite it in a different format because the way Im writing now takes less time. Im sorry to anyone who wanted more of this kind of thing, but hey I just hit a road block with it and have no where to go with it. If you like this though read the other stuff Im preparing to put out.