Take Me Back to the Night We Met

Just a Girl in a Bar

*same story line as the actual show were Meredith and Derek meet in the bar, I'm just continuing it.
*also I'm writing and Dereks poverty in the beginning

I was so tired after performing a 9 hour surgery. The constant rain also doesn't make anything better here. So I just opt to go across the street to the bar that everyone talks about. I sit down at a table near the back and just sit there.

After being there for about ten minutes a beautiful, petite women in a black dress that fit all her curves walks into the bar. I immediately tense up as I watch her confidently walk up to the bar, her hair flowing and her bright green eyes sparkle in the dim lighting of the bar. I stare in awe as she sits down at the bar. Then I hear Joe say:
"Straight Tequila, really?" Joe questions. "You're gonna be sorry in the morning"

"I'm always sorry in the morning" she smiles big and rolls her eyes, "but tomorrow I start my first day of work so keep em' coming"

I have never seen a women so beautiful women in my life. Ever since I moved to Seatle I tried to not think about the life I left but looking at this women now... nothing can compare. I finally get up the courage and walk over next to her.

"How ya doing" I say to Joe, " double scotch single malt please"

Merediths POV:
Joe hands me my tequila when a tall, handsome man with beautiful hair curled to perfection and peiring blue eyes comes up next me. He orders a drink and then smiles at me and says:
"So.....is this a good place to hang out?"

I clear my throat and say" I wouldn't know. I've never been here before"

"OH you know? what I haven't either!" He says joyfully smiling just perfectly." First time here. I'm new in town, I've never been to seatle but I got a job so..."He shifts in his seat and grabs his drink. I don't know what to say, I mean he's handsome but I just got back to seatle and I have an agenda that I need to stick to. Then he says" ah you're ignoring me!"

Plainly I say "I'm trying to"

In a playful tone he says" you shouldn't ignore me"

"Why not?" I stare at his eyes as he take a swig of his drink.

" because I'm someone you need to get to know to love" He say it in a slightly raspy and over confident voice.

"Really" I look at him, his overconfident attitude slightly turning me on.

"OH, yes"

"So if I know you, I'll love you?" I start to play along with his game.

"OH yes!" He start to look at me in the eyes.

"You really like yourself huh?"

"Just hiding my pain" saying it in such a matter than makes us both giggle. Then he says gently" So what's your story"

Though there were many that I could say to scare this man away, instead I saying don't have a story, I'm just a girl in a bar."

I watch as he picks up his drink and says "I'm just a guy in a bar" then he takes another swig of his drink. Such a little thing but the way that he does it is just so....sexy. I smile.

"Well if you're gonna make me keep talking to you, you better but me another drink."

Derek's POV:
I signal Joe over and ask him for another round for both me and the lady. We talk for what feels like hours when I look at the time.
"It's getting late"

"Yeah and....." she say slurring her speech slightly

"And I need to go home so I go to work on time and so do you. Let me drive yiu home you pretty drunk."

"Am not" she says very defensive even though she has had way to much tequila for anyone to process let alone someone.of her size.

" yes you arecommon let me take you home." I say standing up

She gets up and whispers in my ear "well if you insist....." she bites my ear lightly.

I grab her waist and lead her out the door and then to my car. " now where do you live?"she tells me where to turn being quite good for being as drunk as she was. Then we arrive at her house and I open the door for her and make sure she gets inside safely. "Well I guess this is the end of our night?"

She grabs the collar of my red button up and says "well it doesn't have to be" slowly she pulls me closer to her until our lips meet. A kiss has never felt this way before. I feel as though my whole life had been leading up to this kiss. Are tongues start dancing and then I start to suck on her bottom lip, which I notice that she likes. By the time we finally full apart both of our lips are red and we gasp for air. She then pulls me into her house and lock then door and turns around to push me on it............

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*I underestimated how long that scene would be so I'm gonna make a second part to this that is more smutty!
*also do you like how I wrote this, I wanna know if I should keep writing in this format
*finally this is my first story so don't judge too hard