Murder Mystery: A BFDI Fanfic

The First Victim

The party had started. Everyone was having a good time. Except Flower...

She was still thinking about the look of the hotel. She thought of something, she just wasn't sure what... When all of a sudden, a figure came behind her.

"Hey, Flower, are you okay?" It was Firey.

Flower jumped in fear, but calmed down when she noticed who it was. She let out a despondent sigh and responded. "Yeah, I'm alright. It's just, take a look at that hotel." Firey took a look. His eyes widened. He was thinking the same thing she was. This was really suspicious...

"I- I think we shouldn't stay in that hotel tonight..." Firey said as he shivered. He felt a cold chill fly up his back. "Well where else do we stay tonight? The ground? Theres bugs there. I can't just lay on the Earth!" Flower exclaimed. "Well, we have to do something." Firey said. They thought for a moment, what could they possibly do...? "We should bunk together like Match and Pencil." Flower said. 

"Yeah, sure. I'm too scared to sleep alone." So they joined the party, trying to forget about everything they thought about. 

The Bell rung.

It was time to head in.

Everyone walked into the hotel. Flower and Firey took a big gulp, and walked inside with attempted courage. They knew something bad would happen... They just weren't sure what.

Everyone went to their rooms. The lights were shut off, everyone already fast asleep. The party really took the soul out of them. The only thing that was left was the silent chirp of the crickets outside.

Both Firey and Flower were uneasy. They weren't exactly sure if they were thinking of the same thing back at the party. So Firey asks that. "Yeah, we're definitely thinking of the same thing. I just don't know how to explain it.." Flower said. "Same." They just tried to put all of this behind them. 

Soon, it was three in the morning. Everyone was sleepin' and snorin'. Golf Ball woke up from a dream. A bad one. She put the dream back and thought, now that everyone is asleep, I can inspect this island for myself! She was planing to bring TB with her. But A: He was fast asleep hugging his pillow, and B: He probably would be extremely cranky if GB told her the same thing.

She went by herself.

She walked out the hotel door, inspecting the place. She went to start at the party place. Nothing was there, just specs of dust and empty soda cups. She then inspected the spa service house. It was closed. She wouldn't let that stop her. She looked through the window to find the front desk, and a room behind that was filled with spa chairs and beds. 

She then walked to the six restaurants. Each filed with different foods, chicken tenders, burgers, hot dogs, fries, steak, and rice. 

She thought nothing was wrong in the place. Everything in her mind that seemed wrong was completely false. She still had an uneasy feeling about the place. She walked back to the hotel. 

While walking, she observed massive footsteps that weren't built for any object. She started to sweat. This was the exact same idea she was thinking about. She started running back to the hotel. Her mind was filled with all sorts of things. 

Those thoughts were stopped when she tripped over a huge rock. Her face landed on the hard, dirt ground as she did a couple of flips, before stopping those flips to land on her face for the final time. She got up and looked at what tripped her.

It was a rock. 

The rock started to levitate. Going up five feet into the air for a short time. Then, before Golf Ball could do anything about this, the rock flicked towards her. So fast that she didn't even see it. The rock weighed 100 lbs, following the extra force hitting her. She landed on the hotels walls making a huge dent. She passed out.

The morning bell rung. Pin walked out the door first about to get breakfast. When she saw the entrance door, there was a puddle of blood surrounding it. She opened the door, and leaped over the puddle. As she turned to wear it was coming from, she saw Golf Ball, lying lifelessly on the ground. Tears slowly ran down her eyes. She put her body closer to observe the body. 

"What. Are. You. DOING?!" Pin turned and jumped in fear... 

Chapter 3 is in development right now! <3 Also, sorry for how short these chapters are. I'm trying to make them longer. Next chapter will be the longest time length yet.