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Secret Ally 1 Final Marking
TITLE: Perfect Suicide TOTAL SCORE: 78% *** WRITING STYLE: 10% GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION: 18% ENTERTAINMENT VALUE: 30% ORGANIZATION AND COHERENCE: 20% FEEDBACK: The plot was interesting, but you fell back on giving more dimension and depth to your blurb. You had a lot of mistakes grammar-wise, but your punctuations were correct. The first paragraph wasn’t really eye-catching, but as the last sentence ended, you managed to hook me. I liked how you planned out the second paragraph, and I began to feel excited, but when I reached the third paragraph, the momentum fell apart. I suggest making another draft for your blurb and point out the main character’s fear, desire, and goal.
TITLE: Between Day and Night TOTAL SCORE: 70% *** WRITING STYLE: 10% GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION: 15% ENTERTAINMENT VALUE: 25% ORGANIZATION AND COHERENCE: 20% FEEDBACK: I didn’t really see anything extraordinary, but I have high hopes that the story would still turn out good. You still have significant errors both in grammar and punctuation, hence the low scores. Including dialogues in blurbs is okay, but I would recommend removing the last part (“You need to choose in between…” etc.).
TITLE: Spontaneous Love TOTAL SCORE: 75% *** WRITING STYLE: 10% GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION: 15% ENTERTAINMENT VALUE: 30% ORGANIZATION AND COHERENCE: 20% FEEDBACK: I noticed redundancy. Avoid repeating the same words over and over again, as it affects the flow of the sentences. You still have to improve your grammar, but your punctuations are alright. The story itself was good. I added it to my library.
TITLE: Genie in a Bottle TOTAL SCORE: 79% *** WRITING STYLE: 12% GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION: 15% ENTERTAINMENT VALUE: 32% ORGANIZATION AND COHERENCE: 20% FEEDBACK: The story seems great. I added it to my library. You still had a minor mistake in grammar, though. It’s okay. We’re all in the process of learning so continue writing. The plot was interesting, too. Another thing I would like to point out is the dialogues. I think they weren’t really necessary.
TITLE: Accomplishing Her Desires TOTAL SCORE: 73% *** WRITING STYLE: 8% GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION: 12% ENTERTAINMENT VALUE: 38% ORGANIZATION AND COHERENCE: 15% FEEDBACK: I can see what you were trying to point out in your story, but it would be much better if you would elaborate more—without giving spoilers, of course—because I was a bit underwhelmed when the word “vampires, werewolves, wizards, witches, nature elements, and dhampirs” came out of nowhere. The last sentence did not blend in well, too. I would also note that you don’t have to capitalize the vampires, werewolves, etc. That’s all.
