˗ˏˋ Criticism- Qian Kun'ˎ˗
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"𝘾'𝙢𝙤𝙣.. 𝙮𝙤𝙪'𝙫𝙚 𝙗𝙚𝙚𝙣 𝙞𝙣 𝙩𝙝𝙚 𝙗𝙖𝙩𝙝𝙧𝙤𝙤𝙢 𝙛𝙤𝙧 𝙖𝙡𝙢𝙤𝙨𝙩 𝙝𝙖𝙡𝙛 𝙖𝙣 𝙝𝙤𝙪𝙧.." Kun groaned from your shared bedroom. "𝙔-𝙮𝙚𝙖 𝙄𝙢 𝙙𝙤𝙣𝙚." you came out of the toilet wearing the new dress. You spun around and gave your boyfriend a good view of the dress. "𝙎𝙤.? 𝙃𝙤𝙬 𝙙𝙤 𝙄 𝙡𝙤𝙤𝙠..?" you asked, feeling confident about yourself. "𝙄 𝙩𝙤𝙡𝙙 𝙮𝙤𝙪 𝙩𝙤 𝙜𝙤 𝙜𝙚𝙩 𝙧𝙚𝙖𝙙𝙮, 𝙝𝙖𝙫𝙚 𝙮𝙤𝙪 𝙗𝙚𝙚𝙣 𝙨𝙡𝙚𝙚𝙥𝙞𝙣𝙜 𝙙𝙪𝙧𝙞𝙣𝙜 𝙩𝙝𝙚 𝙥𝙖𝙨𝙩 30 𝙢𝙞𝙣𝙩𝙪𝙚𝙨 𝙤𝙧 𝙨𝙤𝙢𝙚𝙩𝙝𝙞𝙣𝙜 ?!" "𝙒𝙝𝙮..? 𝙄 𝙡𝙞𝙠𝙚 𝙞𝙩... 𝙥𝙡𝙪𝙨 𝙬𝙚 𝙖𝙧𝙚 𝙢𝙚𝙚𝙩𝙞𝙣𝙜 𝙮𝙤𝙪𝙧 𝙢𝙪𝙢 𝙩𝙤𝙙𝙖𝙮 𝙖𝙣𝙙 𝙄 𝙬𝙖𝙣𝙣𝙖 𝙝𝙖𝙫𝙚 𝙖 𝙜𝙤𝙤𝙙 𝙛𝙞𝙧𝙨𝙩 𝙞𝙢𝙥𝙧𝙚𝙨𝙨𝙞𝙤𝙣 𝙤𝙣 𝙝𝙚𝙧.." "𝙄𝙛 𝙄 𝙬𝙚𝙧𝙚 𝙮𝙤𝙪 𝙖𝙣𝙙 𝙬𝙖𝙣𝙩𝙚𝙙 𝙖 𝙜𝙤𝙤𝙙 𝙛𝙞𝙧𝙨𝙩 𝙞𝙢𝙥𝙧𝙚𝙨𝙨𝙞𝙤𝙣, 𝙄 𝙬𝙤𝙪𝙡𝙙𝙣'𝙩 𝙝𝙖𝙫𝙚 𝙙𝙧𝙚𝙨𝙨𝙚𝙙 𝙡𝙞𝙠𝙚 𝙩𝙝𝙞𝙨. 𝙇𝙚𝙩𝙨 𝙟𝙪𝙨𝙩 𝙜𝙤." Your heart shattered. Even though your ears have gotten used to it, your heart could never. After 3 years together, has he gotten tired of you? You never knew how it started to become a daily routine that he was cold to you. His coldness turned into meaness. He didn't care about your feelings like he used to. "𝙃𝙪𝙧𝙧𝙮 𝙪𝙥 𝙤𝙧 𝙄'𝙢 𝙙𝙧𝙞𝙫𝙞𝙣𝙜 𝙤𝙛𝙛 𝙬𝙞𝙩𝙝𝙤𝙪𝙩 𝙮𝙤𝙪."
At his parents' house, his parents were nice to you. They offered food, poured you some drinks as your boyfriend just sat there smiling while texting someone. "𝙒𝙝𝙖𝙩'𝙨 𝙨𝙤 𝙛𝙪𝙣𝙣𝙮 𝙗𝙖𝙗𝙚?" "𝙉𝙤𝙣𝙚 𝙤𝙛 𝙮𝙤𝙪𝙧 𝙗𝙪𝙨𝙞𝙣𝙚𝙨𝙨" He said shrugging you off, creating a tension in the room. But he couldn't care less. You excused yourself to the bathroom. Once you went out of the bathroom, you heard chatter between your boyfriend and his parents. "𝙄 𝙩𝙤𝙡𝙙 𝙮𝙤𝙪 𝙈𝙞𝙣𝙟𝙪 𝙬𝙖𝙨 𝙗𝙚𝙩𝙩𝙚𝙧, 𝙩𝙝𝙖𝙩 𝙗*𝙩𝙘𝙝 𝙙𝙤𝙚𝙨𝙣'𝙩 𝙚𝙫𝙚𝙣 𝙠𝙣𝙤𝙬 𝙝𝙤𝙬 𝙩𝙤 𝙨𝙚𝙧𝙫𝙚 𝙝𝙚𝙧𝙨𝙚𝙡𝙛 𝙛𝙤𝙤𝙙." You didn't know why buy u had the urge to record the conversation. You took out your phone and recorded it. "𝙈𝙪𝙢... 𝘿𝙤𝙣'𝙩 𝙨𝙥𝙚𝙖𝙠 𝙖𝙗𝙤𝙪𝙩 𝙝𝙚𝙧 𝙩𝙝𝙖𝙩 𝙬𝙖𝙮.. 𝙮𝙤𝙪 𝙛𝙤𝙧𝙘𝙞𝙣𝙜 𝙢𝙚 𝙩𝙤 𝙖𝙘𝙩 𝙡𝙞𝙠𝙚 𝙄 𝙝𝙖𝙩𝙚 𝙝𝙚𝙧, 𝙄 𝙘𝙖𝙣'𝙩 𝙙𝙤 𝙩𝙝𝙞𝙨 𝙩𝙤 𝙝𝙚𝙧 𝙖𝙣𝙮𝙢𝙤𝙧𝙚... 𝙞𝙩 𝙝𝙖𝙨 𝙗𝙚𝙚𝙣 𝙖 𝙮𝙚𝙖𝙧.. 𝙡𝙚𝙩 𝙞𝙩 𝙜𝙤."
You knew that Kun's mother has always cherished his ex, Minju. You couldn't believe that you didn't think of this sooner. You knew nobody hated his ex more than he himself. But nowadays he just compares you to her, by the way you dress, talk, act and walk. "𝙃𝙤𝙣𝙚𝙮,𝙥𝙡𝙚𝙖𝙨𝙚.. 𝙣𝙤𝙩 𝙣𝙤𝙬. 𝙉𝙤 𝙤𝙣𝙚 𝙨𝙩𝙤𝙥𝙥𝙚𝙙 𝙮𝙤𝙪 𝙛𝙧𝙤𝙢 𝙘𝙤𝙣𝙩𝙧𝙤𝙡𝙡𝙞𝙣𝙜 𝙆𝙪𝙣 𝙤𝙣 𝙝𝙤𝙬 𝙝𝙚 𝙖𝙘𝙩𝙚𝙙 𝙩𝙤𝙬𝙖𝙧𝙙𝙨 𝙮/𝙣... 𝙙𝙤𝙣'𝙩 𝙩𝙝𝙞𝙨 𝙧𝙞𝙜𝙝𝙩 𝙣𝙤𝙬, 𝙨𝙝𝙚 𝙬𝙞𝙡𝙡 𝙝𝙚𝙖𝙧 𝙮𝙤𝙪" you heard his father trying to stop her. "𝙒𝙝𝙖𝙩𝙚𝙫𝙚𝙧, 𝙈𝙞𝙣𝙟𝙪 𝙬𝙖𝙨 𝙨𝙩𝙞𝙡𝙡 𝙗𝙚𝙩𝙩𝙚𝙧, 𝙨𝙝𝙚 𝙝𝙖𝙙 𝙨𝙪𝙘𝙝 𝙜𝙤𝙤𝙙 𝙛𝙖𝙨𝙝𝙞𝙤𝙣 𝙨𝙚𝙣𝙨𝙚, 𝙪𝙣𝙡𝙞𝙠𝙚 𝙮/𝙣" The moment you stepped out from the spot you've been hiding since just now. 𝘽𝘼𝙉𝙂!! you flinched, letting an inaudible whimper. "𝙏𝙃𝘼𝙏'𝙎 𝙀𝙉𝙊𝙐𝙂𝙃 !!" you saw kun slam the table, not being able to hold his anger anymore.
You made eye contact with him, you saw his eyes softened at the sight of you. He slowly came up to and grabbed your hand gently and brought you back to the dining table. "𝙄'𝙢 𝙨𝙤 𝙙𝙤𝙣𝙚 𝙬𝙞𝙩𝙝 𝙮𝙤𝙪 𝙩𝙝𝙞𝙣𝙠𝙞𝙣𝙜 𝙩𝙝𝙖𝙩 𝙈𝙞𝙣𝙟𝙪 𝙬𝙤𝙪𝙡𝙙 𝙘𝙤𝙢𝙚 𝙗𝙖𝙘𝙠. 𝙄 𝙡𝙤𝙫𝙚 𝙮/𝙣 𝙖𝙣𝙙 𝙣𝙤𝙩𝙝𝙞𝙣𝙜 𝙬𝙞𝙡𝙡 𝙘𝙝𝙖𝙣𝙜𝙚 𝙩𝙝𝙖𝙩, 𝙣𝙤𝙩 𝙚𝙫𝙚𝙣 𝙮𝙤𝙪𝙧 𝙤𝙗𝙨𝙚𝙨𝙨𝙞𝙤𝙣 𝙬𝙞𝙩𝙝 𝙢𝙮 𝙚𝙭. 𝙔𝙤𝙪 𝙬𝙖𝙣𝙩 𝙩𝙤 𝙠𝙣𝙤𝙬 𝙩𝙝𝙚 𝙩𝙧𝙪𝙩𝙝?!" You gripped his hand a little tighter, making his attention go to you. You shook your head slightly, not wanting him to say that as you knew how much it affected him. "𝙄𝙩𝙨 𝙛𝙞𝙣𝙚 𝙮/𝙣, 𝙞𝙛 𝙩𝙝𝙞𝙨 𝙞𝙨 𝙝𝙤𝙬 𝙩𝙝𝙚𝙮 𝙬𝙖𝙣𝙩 𝙩𝙤 𝙛𝙞𝙣𝙙 𝙤𝙪𝙩, 𝙩𝙝𝙚𝙣 𝙛𝙞𝙣𝙚. 𝘼𝙨 𝙡𝙤𝙣𝙜 𝙖𝙨 𝙄'𝙢 𝙬𝙞𝙩𝙝 𝙮𝙤𝙪." He turned his head back to his parents, but especially his mother. "𝙏𝙝𝙚 𝙈𝙞𝙣𝙟𝙪 𝙩𝙝𝙖𝙩 𝙮𝙤𝙪 𝙡𝙤𝙫𝙚 𝙖𝙣𝙙 𝙖𝙙𝙤𝙧𝙚 𝙨𝙤 𝙢𝙪𝙘𝙝, 𝙨𝙝𝙚 𝙘𝙝𝙚𝙖𝙩𝙚𝙙 𝙤𝙣 𝙢𝙚, 𝙬𝙞𝙩𝙝 𝙖 𝙣𝙖𝙨𝙩𝙮 𝙧𝙞𝙘𝙝 𝙢𝙖𝙣. 𝙎𝙝𝙚 𝙨𝙖𝙞𝙙 𝙨𝙝𝙚 𝙣𝙚𝙫𝙚𝙧 𝙡𝙤𝙫𝙚𝙙 𝙢𝙚 𝙣𝙚𝙞𝙩𝙝𝙚𝙧 𝙢𝙮 𝙛𝙖𝙢𝙞𝙡𝙮. 𝙉𝙤𝙬 𝙞𝙛 𝙮𝙤𝙪 𝙚𝙭𝙘𝙪𝙨𝙚 𝙪𝙨, 𝙬𝙚 𝙬𝙤𝙪𝙡𝙙 𝙧𝙖𝙩𝙝𝙚𝙧 𝙗𝙚 𝙨𝙤𝙢𝙚𝙬𝙝𝙚𝙧𝙚 𝙚𝙡𝙨𝙚 𝙩𝙝𝙖𝙣 𝙝𝙚𝙧𝙚, 𝙬𝙝𝙚𝙧𝙚 𝙨𝙝𝙚 𝙘𝙖𝙣'𝙩 𝙗𝙚 𝙝𝙚𝙧𝙨𝙚𝙡𝙛. 𝙇𝙚𝙩𝙨 𝙜𝙤 𝙮/𝙣." He said holding you hand and walking out on his shocked parents.
The car ride back home was so silent that you could hear a pin drop. The atmosphere was tense no doubt. Kun was busy thinking of what he should say to you after dropping a bomb like that. You on the other hand was nervous, you didn't know for what but you were panicking inside. You both arrived at your house after a few minutes. You held the door handle(?) of the car but Kun held your hand to stop you. He came out of the car and opened the door for you. You weren't used to this kind of gesture awkwardly took out your key to open the door. Kun pushes you to the side slightly and opened the door instead. He sat down on the sofa. You just stood there and headed to your bedroom. Before you could go in, Kun gently grabbed your wrist. He pulled you onto his lap.
You got so flustered and you felt your face turn bright red. "𝘽𝙖𝙗𝙮... 𝙄 𝙠𝙣𝙤𝙬 𝙖 𝙨𝙤𝙧𝙧𝙮 𝙞𝙨𝙣'𝙩 𝙚𝙣𝙤𝙪𝙜𝙝 𝙛𝙤𝙧 𝙬𝙝𝙖𝙩 𝙄'𝙫𝙚 𝙨𝙖𝙞𝙙 𝙩𝙤 𝙮𝙤𝙪 𝙛𝙤𝙧 𝙩𝙝𝙚 𝙥𝙖𝙨𝙩 𝙤𝙣𝙚 𝙮𝙚𝙖𝙧.. 𝙄 𝙙𝙞𝙙𝙣'𝙩 𝙢𝙚𝙖𝙣 𝙖𝙣𝙮𝙩𝙝𝙞𝙣𝙜 𝙄 𝙨𝙖𝙞𝙙, 𝙩𝙧𝙪𝙨𝙩 𝙢𝙚, 𝙄 𝙡𝙤𝙫𝙚 𝙮𝙤𝙪 𝙬𝙞𝙩𝙝 𝙢𝙮 𝙬𝙝𝙤𝙡𝙚 𝙝𝙚𝙖𝙧𝙩 𝙖𝙣𝙙 𝙮𝙤𝙪 𝙢𝙞𝙜𝙝𝙩 𝙣𝙤𝙩 𝙠𝙣𝙤𝙬 𝙞𝙩 𝙗𝙪𝙩 𝙄 𝙨𝙝𝙤𝙬 𝙖𝙛𝙛𝙚𝙘𝙩𝙞𝙤𝙣 𝙩𝙤 𝙮𝙤𝙪 𝙬𝙝𝙚𝙣 𝙮𝙤𝙪𝙧𝙚 𝙣𝙤𝙩 𝙖𝙬𝙖𝙧𝙚." Now that you looked back, you dreamt of someone placing kisses on your lips every night, maybe it wasn't a dream after all. "𝙄 𝙬𝙖𝙨 𝙬𝙤𝙧𝙧𝙞𝙚𝙙 𝙤𝙛 𝙬𝙝𝙖𝙩 𝙢𝙮 𝙥𝙖𝙧𝙚𝙣𝙩𝙨 𝙬𝙤𝙪𝙡𝙙 𝙨𝙖𝙮, 𝙩𝙝𝙚𝙮 𝙨𝙖𝙞𝙙 𝙩𝙝𝙚𝙮 𝙬𝙤𝙪𝙡𝙙 𝙢𝙖𝙠𝙚 𝙢𝙚 𝙗𝙧𝙚𝙖𝙠 𝙪𝙥 𝙬𝙞𝙩𝙝 𝙮𝙤𝙪 𝙞𝙛 𝙄 𝙙𝙞𝙙𝙣'𝙩 𝙖𝙘𝙩 𝙩𝙝𝙞𝙨 𝙬𝙖𝙮 𝙩𝙤 𝙮𝙤𝙪... 𝙗𝙪𝙩 𝙩𝙝𝙖𝙩 𝙨𝙝𝙤𝙪𝙡𝙙𝙣'𝙩 𝙗𝙚 𝙖𝙣 𝙚𝙭𝙘𝙪𝙨𝙚 𝙩𝙤 𝙩𝙧𝙚𝙖𝙩 𝙮𝙤𝙪 𝙩𝙝𝙞𝙨 𝙬𝙖𝙮.. 𝙄'𝙢 𝙨𝙤𝙧𝙧𝙮.. 𝙖𝙣𝙙 𝙮𝙤𝙪 𝙡𝙤𝙤𝙠 𝙜𝙤𝙧𝙜𝙚𝙤𝙪𝙨 𝙞𝙣 𝙩𝙝𝙖𝙩 𝙙𝙧𝙚𝙨𝙨 𝙖𝙣𝙙 𝙮𝙤𝙪 𝙙𝙞𝙙𝙣'𝙩 𝙣𝙚𝙚𝙙 𝙩𝙤 𝙨𝙩𝙧𝙖𝙞𝙜𝙝𝙩𝙚𝙣 𝙮𝙤𝙪𝙧 𝙝𝙖𝙞𝙧 𝙛𝙤𝙧 𝙝𝙚𝙧." You didn't think he'd notice. He stared your figure for a few seconds, admiring how gorgeous you look. He then looked up to you nnd smirked. "𝙄 𝙠𝙣𝙤𝙬 𝙖 𝙬𝙖𝙮 𝙩𝙤 𝙢𝙖𝙠𝙚 𝙪𝙥 𝙛𝙤𝙧 𝙬𝙝𝙖𝙩 𝙄 𝙨𝙖𝙞𝙙 𝙩𝙤𝙙𝙖𝙮.." He then held your cheek and placed his lips onto yours.
It felt like your heart burst into fireworks creating an explosive reaction to you body. His hand then travelled to your waist and not ling after he lifted you up and he brought you to your shared bedroom. (The End. Let your imagination run wild yea )
