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☕ Those unsaid words

Book title: Those unsaid words

Author: @wild_imaginator16

Ellen's Rating:⭐⭐🌜

My take:

The perquisite of a poem is that it express emotions in a poetic manner, and in the same vein trigger an emotion or more in the reader.  This is achieved by transferring those emotions artfully into words.

     I believe you achieved this feat to some extent. You were able to evoke strong emotions with really simple words which is quite rare.

Your topics were well chosen, your poem spoke volumes, the way you started each poem was beautiful, and the end was intruguing.

Your cover is nice, but i think you can do better. A cover that is not just beautiful, but has more to it. It should be catchy and appeal to the mind.

I would recommend a couple of graphic shops that are taking orders to help you sort that one out.

The title is nice, but I think the theme of most the poems you wrote are not 'unsaid'. I--
It's still cool though.

So your catchphrase is not really poetic. You could find a sentence or quote from somewhere or your poem, that is inline with the theme of your book to remedy that.

Fix the grammatical errors I pointed out, and watch out for them in the future. Also redo the first poem, it needs work.

Nevertheless, I would always recommend your poem to anyone who loves authentic and creative poems, cause this one posses those attributes.
    For growth, you could join a book club that is functional. I could recommend a few...via DM

Finally, do you. I believe you know what you're doing. Sorround yourself with healthy company, people who bring out the best in you.

And always write! No matter how absurd the feeling is, put it down. And never let anyone make you feel less, never get tired of improving.

So, it's two stars and half a moon from me.😘✨

All the best!🍰☕

And uhmmm...I don't know why I can't tag you.