Suicide and Asylum

Chapter 1

Kit was always a depressed kid,Though it got worse when he was 15 years old. Our mother was killed by our father then he disappeared. Kit had witnessed everything.

Laura: My name is Laura. I am Kit's Older sister. I was 18 years old when we lost our parents mom to our father murdering her then our father disappeared. Because I was of age I was allowed to keep Kit with me. We would call the police weekly hoping they found something out but they never did.

A year went by no word and Kit just slipped deeper into his depression. He was now 16 years old and drinking and doing drugs. Laura knew that he knew it was wrong and not what their mother wanted for him. However she also knew he wasn't able to stop himself.

Kit: I was always depressed but after I witnessed my father kill my mom then disappear himself I got much worse. I had just come from school and heard fighting as usual. I go in but only until I was hidden from being on the stairs. I knew my dad could get violent I'd seen it before so was worried about mom. My older sister was out at a friends after school. She was an 18 year old senior while at 15 years old I was a freshman and my best friend was grounded so here I was home to witness the most terrible thing in my life. Not going into detail cause honestly I only heard the tail end of the fight and my mothers life. I was working on History homework when I heard my mother choke out to please stop I can't  breathe. I got closer to the wall to look around it and my father had her in a extremely tight grip around her throat.Eyes wide I got back fast scared he'd see me. He gripped tighter apparently because next I knew I heard the back door open up and my father ran out. I got up from my seat on the steps and ran to my mother. She wasn't breathing so I got up crying called 911 and then when they said someone's coming I called Laura and told her to come home explaining the police were coming and I needed her with me.

10 minutes later the police and Laura were here. I told them everything. Laura is crying now and holding me while I cry. The police ask how old we are and after I said 15 and Laura 18 they told us since I am 15 social services will be called to deal with living arrangements. Laura said we already lost our parents please don't separate us too so the policeman said he would recommend not to since Laura's 18.Social Services showed up and decided to keep us together since that's what we both wanted. Once they all left my sister tries to get me to eat something but I wasn't hungry I was too upset about mom. Neither one of us can sleep knowing in a few days we'd have to bury our mother.

Please let me know what you all think of my edited first chapter. Want to make this more interesting than my first Book I am currently stuck on found more inspiration with this book.