Chapter 11

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Yes that person was MANIK MALHOTRA ❤️

Chalo driver meeting ke liye late ho jaayega !! - Manik said

Driver - Par sir aap toh utre bhi nahi hai car se aapko kisi se milna tha na?
Manik - Apna kaam karo! (In a from voice making driver gulp and making him make a U-turn)

Nandini reaches her home
Her mom did her arti smilingly
Nandini bends to take blessings from her mother
Naina holds her and hugs her tightly

Siya was looking at them with jealousy sitting on sofa clutching her head because of hangover 🌚
Last night party thi🌚

Nandini goes in her room and takes bath and changes into comfy pyajamas and tshirt
She come down to have breakfast or brunch 😅
She missed her parents alot in medical college but it's worth it ✨

All were gossiping except Siya who get up and leave to her room
Nandini - Maa didi ko kya hua?
Santosh - Chhor usse tu panner khaa (serves her sabji in plate)
Just then they hear heel sounds
They saw Siya in one piece with full makeup
Nandini - Didi aao baitho na
Siya - I'm going for party at Supriya's place... I don't have time for your talks!

Siya leaves

Nandini kept looking at door
She felt very bad
Naina - Nandu beta chhor usse jaane de!
Nandini - Maa! Didi ne baat bhi nahi kiya ek baari mujhse in 5 saalo me
Santosh - Chhor na beta kya baat karegi isse ? Daaru pine se fursat hai isse?
Nandini looked at her dad
Santosh giggled (Trying to make Nandini laugh)
Nandini also laughed (fakely)

After their Breakfast

Nandini comes in her room to rest for sometime as she is tired from journey
She slept till evening

Santosh was reading newspaper (for time pass)
Naina was in kitchen Preparing dinner
Nandini comes down & sits beside Santosh
Santosh - Uth gaya mera baccha ?
Nandini - Hmmm (she hugged her father sideways and kept her head on his shoulder)

Naina - Suniye jii Panner la dijiye !
Nandini eyes shined - Maa aap palak paneer bana rahe ho?
Naina nods in yes
Nandini shouts - yessss!
Santosh - Princess get ready ! Chalo aapko ghuma ke lata hu
Nandini - Abhi aayi papa !

Nandini gets ready in a jeans top and come downstairs without any Makeup looking beautiful as always
Santosh starts his scooty with Nandini behind him sitting

Sir ! Nandini mam apne papa ke saath kahi ja rahi hai !

Follow her ! And woh jaha utre mujhe batana !

Okay sir !

Manik's work is done !
He gets the deal and Raj is very happy
His son has totally changed in these years

Manik gets up from his chair and grabs his coat he goes towards his father cabin & knocks on his cabin door

Raj - Come in !
Manik - Dad ! Woh main thora bahar ja raha hu dosto ke saath
Raj - Okay !
Manik started to go
Raj - Aur sunn
Manik turns - jii
Raj - Jaldi aa jana or kam pina !
Manik whined - Dad!!!!

Manik goes towards his car
Driver - Ji sir kaha le chalu?
Manik - Nikal !
Driver - Arre sir ! Mujhe bataiye toh maine kiya kya hai!
Manik - Arre Nikal pehle !
Driver gets out
Manik - Yeh le (gives him 1 thousand rupees) ja bhabhi ko restaurant le ja
Driver gets happy & say - Thankyou sir
Manik nods

Manik gets inside the car and just then recieves a call
Manik - Hello
Person - Sir mam supermarket me aayi hai kuch kuch kharid rahi hai !
Manik - Okay
Manik cuts the call & smirks & start driving to supermarket

His friendship with Harshad is very good now
Manik come after five years and when he meet Harshad
Harshad hugs him smilingly

Manik reaches supermarket & parks his car
He leaves his coat in car only
He gets inside to saw his Man
Man - Sir left side
Manik nods & hands him a 2 thousand rupees note
Manik goes in left side to saw Nandini with trolley reading item names and keeping them in trolley
Her father was not there

Manik looked at her from top to bottom
Her long hairs till her waist
Her face devoid of any Makeup still glowing her pink lips which she was biting with her lower lip
Making Manik hard
Nandini was engrossed in shopping but realising a gaze on herself she turns but found no one
She frowned just then her phone rings

Nandini takes her phone out to see
flashing
Shubham ❤️

Nandini - Hello !
Shubham - Hey !
Nandini - Kaise ho Shubham? If you don't mind main baad me baat karu abhi supermarket me hu!
Shubham - Ha dekh raha hu Nutella ke 2 jar liye hai tumne
Nandini - Tumhe kaise pata & Nandini turns to see Shubham standing in a distance

A smile comes to Nandini face
Shubham comes towards her
Nandini hugs him tightly
Shubham also hugged her back smilingly

They both breaks the hug
And smiled looking at each other
Nandini - Tum yaha kaise?
Shubham - Tum jaha Main waha (dramatically)
Nandini slaps his shoulder
Shubham giggled

Just then Nandini phone rings again
Maa❤️
Nandini - Jii maa
Maa - Aaj panner la degi?
Nandini slaps her forehead and say - Aa rahi leke bass
Shubham giggled seeing her & Nandini holds his hand with her left hand & drags him her right hand dragging the trolley













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