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00 |Rules

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There will be a password amongst the rules so keep an eye out and read theme carefully. Your supposed to read the rules carefully either way though.

1. Writing

This is a literate roleplay, therefore I expect at least a full paragraph or two. I understand we sometimes are tired and can't squeeze out four five paragraphs at the moment, I also do that, but that doesn't mean it should become a constant habit. I would honestly love if your able to do at least five or six chapters, if more then that's even better, just no one liners. The more detail the paragraph and response, the more I can work with and actually move the roleplay along, a one liner doesn't give much to work with.

Bad Example: She stared up at him before looking down.

Okay, so she looked at him and then looked down. What am I supposed to do  with this?[Password 1: Tag a friend]What was she doing with her hands, what's the situation? Did she have a fearful look on her face, was it a shy way? Like she's sneaking a peek at him before hurriedly looking away before he discovers her? WHAT DOSE IT MEAN?! You get me right?

Good Example: tugging slightly at her damp locks, she glanced at the male from the corners of her eyes. Her eyes glaring daggers at the side of his face, lips pulled into a deep frown. If it wasn't for his stubbornness, they wouldn't be in this situation, soaking wet outside the school. Before he could catch her staring,  she turned her head back to the front, frown deepening at the sight of the approaching students.

I can work with this, it actually give me hints on what exactly happened before these two characters appeared at a school. Something happened that got them wet, and according to the girl anger towards the boy, it's his fault. They are probably being punished as well to stand in front of the school due to what happen, which would explain her unhappiness at the sight of other students. I'm just guessing here, again the person didn't exactly give me what happened to these two. They didn't tell why they are wet, or if the girl is the only one wet, or if the two are students or just came to pick up someone. Heck it doesn't even define a relationship besides hinting at some familiarity between them. In other words this is good, just not great.

Great Example: Anthony was so going to get it. Here she was, standing in front of the school, soaking wet from head to toe. All because of some stupid prank he decided would be fun to pull, she hadn't wanted to be apart of it, but he had his ways. He could simply throw his arm around her waist and give her that heart melting smile and she was putty in his hands. Tugging at her damp locks, she shot a withering glare towards the approaching boy, her frown deepening at the wide grin that spread across his face. Making a point to looked away, she ignored the amused laughter that came out of him, focusing on glaring at the approaching students who all had knowing looks within their eyes.

Now this I can work with and even get excited to respond to, I may not know what the prank  was but that leaves rooms for the imagination! I know the relationship between the characters and know the reason why she is angry at the boy. I also get the feel of their personality, the boy seem to be mischievous fun loving person while the girl seemed to be study rule abiding students who is easily influenced by her friend.  Also it seem she may like him, basically do this but  more paragraphs!

And like those examples I gave, you need to write-no must write in third person. It's something I'm more used to and gives more room for description.