SUPRISE

SURPRISE - III

Ladka aur ladki dono bike pe baite aur phir ladke ne ladki ko ghar par chod diya.. Us raat un dono ne raaste mei kuch baatein ki aur vo dono dost ban gaye..

Yeh dosti dheere dheere waqt ke saath mazbut hota gaya.. Aur dheere dheere waqt bitate bitate kab dono ko ek dusre se pyaar hua pata hi nahi chala..

Kavin : Bas ab mujhse aur nahi likha jaata.. Kitna sochna padh raha hai yaar.. Mujhse nahi hoga.. Aaj tum drive kar lo..

Saying this he gives the keys to Purvi. Both left to their house. Later at night, Purvi woke up & saw that Kavin was in the other room with the lights on. She peeked inside lightly & saw that he was working on his laptop.

Purvi (mind) : Itni raat ko yeh kaam kar rahe hai..?

Kavin went inside washroom, taking this as an advantage, she goes inside & sees that he did some changes to the story & completed it. She saw that he replaced "Ladka" with "Kavin" and "ladki" with "Purvi". She blushed a bit & smiled. She read the last paragraph which has a beautiful ending.

Ek waqt pe do anjaan log mile aur halaaton ki wajah se unki pehchaan hui ek dusre se.. Pehchaan dheere dheere dosti ka rup liya aur dheere dheere waqt ke saath pyaar mei badal gaya.. Pyaar ne un dono ko shaadi ke bandhan mei baandh liya aur vo apne rishte ko lekar khush the..

Waqt beet tha gaya aur dono ke beech pyaar badhta tha tho kabhi kam bhi hota tha.. Dono ladte jhagadte lekin aapas mei baitkar apni ladaai ka hal bhi dhundh lete.. Dono aapas mei kitna bhi lade lekin utna pyaar bhi karte the.. Aakhir pyaar hai hi aisi cheez hai jo do dilon ko baand deta hai..

Pati patni ke rishte mei sabse khaas cheez yahi tho hai.. Ek haseen mulakaat, kuch khatti meethi yaadein, cute si cat fights, rootna-manana aur hat ke pyaar karna..

Sabse zyada maza kab aata hai pata hai..? Jab biwi ko jaan buch ke gussa dilaye aur chupke se uske peet peeche uspe jo pyaar hai uska alag tarike se izhaar karne se.. Kabhi try kar ke dekho..

Purvi adds something to that & leaves from there. Kavin saw her leaving from there, so he went to the laptop & read what she has written.

NOTE : Ha kar ke dekho aur agar biwi belan leke peeche na pade na tab bolna..

Kavin bursted into laughing after reading that sentence.

Kavin (a bit louder which is audible to her) : Lekin meri biwi tho peeche nahi padi hai belan leke.. Maine shyaam ko jaan buch ke naam nahi bataya ladka ladki ka aur baad mei maine usi ka naam jod diya khud ke saath...

Purvi (low tone) : Isliye tho bach gaye varna mai belan leke zaroor peeche aati...

Kavin heard what she said as he came out of the room. He looked at her with disbelief..

Kavin (mind) : Oy maa..!!! Yeh belan kisne banaya hai.. Seeda biwi ka hatyaar hi bana diya..

Purvi laid on the bed & Kavin laid beside her quietly. After some time, Purvi sleeps & Kavin again remembers about the proposal. He everytime forgets about the proposal (her reply to his proposal).

He finally decided to ask her the next day but he was called by one of his employees in a busy meeting. That night, he was in his office & he changed the ending a bit before posting the story.

Pati patni ke rishte mei sabse khaas cheez yahi tho hai.. Ek haseen mulakaat, kuch khatti meethi yaadein, cute si cat fights, rootna-manana aur hat ke pyaar karna..

Mulakaatein haseen ho ya na ho lekin mulakaat se zyada zaroori hota hai ki hum jisse pyaar karte hai vo humse kitna pyaar karta hai ya karti hai.. Dono aapas mei kitna bhi ladh le magar vo ladaaiyan hi haseen yaadein ban jaati hai..

Kavin aur Purvi ka mulakaat se pyaar tak ka safar yaha khatam nahi hota hai kyunki pyaar unka manzil nahi hai.. Pyaar khud ek safar hai jo ladaaiyon mei, hasi mazaak jaisi jagah rukte hue, chalte hue ek din khatam ho jaata hai ek manzil pe jo hai maut..

Yaha kaun amar hai jo har waqt zinda rehta hai.. Ek waqt pe do dil mile, waqt ke saath saath ek dusre ke jaan ban gaye aur ek waqt pe tham gaye.. Zindagi ke baad in do dilon ka kya hoga yeh tho nahi pata magar log kehte hai ki phir dusre janam mei milenge..

Mujhe yeh sunkar bahut hasi aati hai.. Vo do dil jo ek waqt pe tham gaye vo bichade kab the maut ke baad bhi yeh aaj tak mai tho samajh nahi paaya aur na hi samajh paaunga.. Lekin shayad bichadte honge varna phir dusre janam mei haseen mulaakat kaise hogi..?

Khair, jo bhi ho har prem kahani ka shuruwaat ek haseen mulakaat se shuru hote hue, kuch haseen yaadon se guzarte hue ek din vo pyaar ka safar khatam ho jaata hai.. Isliye is kahani ka naam hai "PYAAR KA SAFAR".

A/N : Ab bahut log mujhse puchenge ki maine kahani ka naam pehle kyun nahi bataya..? Pehle bata deta tho padhne ka maza kaha aata..?

Kavin got so busy in his work from that day. He didn't get time to see how many people read the story & how many voted for his story. Soon, a month passes by & finally he gets a message notification saying that he won a date with his devil.

He was surprised or should I say shocked..? He opened his profile & was shocked to see the results. He not only won the date with his devil but he also got few offers from the readers asking him to become a professional writer. He also noticed that his story crossed his favourite devil's stories too.

Kavin (surprised) : Yeh kaise hogaya...? Aisa kya likh diya maine...? Chota sa os hi tho likha hai..

He read the comments from the readers & the readers asked him to be a writer as they loved his story very much.

Kavin : No thank you, mai itna chota os likhne ke liye kitna soch soch ke likha sirf mujhe pata hai..

Kavin gets ready to meet his devil as he won that competition. He was very excited to meet her. He went to the venue at the correct time. He entered inside a restaurant when the manager suddenly told him to remember whatever words he sees. Kavin goes inside the lawn as the manager directed him.

He sees few people standing with letters in a row on both sides leaving a space for him to enter inside. He read the letters which said...

"HAPPY"

He entered inside wondering what type of message it could be. The whole lawn was empty. Suddenly, a waiter asked to see in a direction & when Kavin saw in that direction, he saw "BIRTHDAY" written on it.

"BIRTHDAY"

Kavin thought of both the words & he said, "Happy birthday".. He felt a tap on his shoulder & when he turned back he was surprised to see his wife there. Before he says anything, he got to know that Purvi is devil143_imaginations.