Quick question for you guys, are you enjoying the storyline?
I've recently re-read my entire book to check for spelling errors or grammar mistakes and I found myself cringing at some parts.
I feel like my pacing is also really bad too. I don't know if it's just me, though. Let me know if you guys like the story or not, also inform me on things I could improve on.
That is why I'm writing in the first place after all! To get better at it.
Edit: I'm glad you're all enjoying the story! Sorry about the updates that are coming out than usual, I've been busy lately.
Anyway, that's all. Have a great day or night. 😊
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