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┊͙ ˘͈ᵕ˘͈PARTICIPANT 5::
MAIN PERSON/OBJECT:: The face claim you've used fits the theme perfectly as their facial expressions are matching.
BACKGROUND:: The background is kinda dark but I think it's perfect cause your theme was dark. It even matches their dresses and the atmosphere of the cover, which I definitely love.
FILTERS/EFFECTS:: The filter is also nice, not too dark, not too light and I also loved the small dust you added to the cover to make it look more realistic.
But there is a thing which I don't like that much, it's the black tears or something that you added beneath the eyes. It's because their expression is neutral, not too happy, not too sad and the thing you've added looks like tears so it doesn't match that much and somehow ruins the beauty of the cover in a different way.
TEXT:: The text is also good, I loved the colors you've used. The black and white pattern somehow makes the text look more beautiful.
But here's a mistake too, I didn't like the way you've added the text. It doesn't look balanced equally.
I mean 'the' part is somewhere else while 't' in the 'the' part is leaving its place and it looks misplaced. Ik what you wanted to do actually but something different happened.
Rest is perfect ✨
I hope you take this review in a positive way.
┊͙ ˘͈ᵕ˘͈PARTICIPANT 6::
MAIN PERSON/OBJECT:: The face claim of Rose is nice as her expression is neutral with something unknown mixed but it fits the theme perfectly which I loved.
BACKGROUND:: I loved how you showed the skin behind her, the sky is also dark. I mean not black, it's dark and the red/orange lines or clouds or whatever it is looks amazing. Something different which I saw among the entries.
FILTERS/EFFECTS:: The filter is perfect and it includes the face claim too, however, I want to say that the cover is blurred even if I tried to enhance it. The face claim is actually blurry, next time use a not blurry face claim.
TEXT:: Okay so the text is nice, but here is another mistake. The 'above us' part somewhat isn't that visible. Ik wat you are thinking that it is visible but I want to say that, it's a little difficult to view it. I'll tell you why. The first thing is because of the color, it matches too much and if you don't want to change the color then you can add shadow to the text so it can be separated instead of merging colors.
One more thing! The font always matters, never use a cute type of fonts in the dark type of covers or graphics. I'm talking about the subtitle. Ik I said the cover to be aesthetic but even aesthetic has its own types, like dark aesthetic, light aesthetic, and much more.
Rest is perfect✨
I hope you take this review in a positive way.
┊͙ ˘͈ᵕ˘͈PARTICIPANT 7::
MAIN PERSON/OBJECT:: The face claim is nice, Rose suits perfectly for the theme including the facial expressions but there's a lil mistake which is, you haven't cut the image properly, Rose's face claim, and also the lighting of the face claim. Even though her expressions are perfect and everything but lighting matters first.
What is the lighting? or what I call it. Well, lighting is the main thing in the picture. Can you see that there's light appearing on her face and some part of the body?
But in your background, there isn't any light coming through the direction which somewhat looks kinda odd from my perspective of course.
Even if there is little light in the part but there isn't any light coming through it.
Always remember that the background is behind the face is not above them, so you need to add light or something like that above the face and not behind.
BACKGROUND:: Everything is good as I already said above, the only problem is the lighting of the background. And one more thing, you need to add some lighting on the grass to make it more realistic. You can see that there's light on the face then some in the sky but there isn't any on the grass. So, you need to do that next time.
FILTERS/EFFECTS:: The effects are what I love the most. Especially I loved how you added Rose's pictures in the cards around which is very very creative.
I also loved the filter which suits the background perfectly and in a good way. The flower petals falling are beautiful too.
TEXT:: Okay so here the text doesn't match the cover that much. I suggest you use light colors for the title instead of back or dark ones. It's because your background is dark and not light so when the background is dark use light colors and when the background is light use dark colors for making it balanced.
The next thing is to try to make the text bigger and not in one line, you can arrange it in a particular order so that the cover doesn't look empty and also the subtitle is perfect.
Rest is perfect ✨
I hope you take this review in a positive way.
┊͙ ˘͈ᵕ˘͈PARTICIPANT 8::
BACKGROUND:: Okay so I really don't know what the background actually is but it completely suits the theme and hence it's nice.
FACE CLAIM:: It suits the theme of the cover perfectly as the facial expressions are neutral. It's also not blurry and properly visible.
EFFECTS/FILTERS:: Idk who she is but she's beautiful and I loved the face claim not because the person is beautiful but because of your creativity. I loved how you manipulated the face which is damn hard...
Her hair looks glowing which is what I loved and her lip color also matches the cover in a very weird yet creative way.
The only thing I think could be more good is the lighting on her face. I suggest you reduce its opacity a lil bit or else it would look like it's a lil overdone and also blur it for spreading it on her face uniformly.
I also loved the prices of the glass you added between the text
TEXT:: Hmm, the text is very nice tbh. I like the cut effect you gave on it which is definitely impressive. Also, the gasses effect, and I loved how you made the text behind the pieces of glass blurry, it makes it more realistic.
The thing which I think can be improved is the glow you've added around the text. I love it but it kinda blurs the text which I didn't like that much.
Rest all is perfect✨
I hope you take this review in a positive way.
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