Ascendence of the flash

Chapter 3

Chapter 3

AN: I actually have little idea of what to say this time. On one hand, people are ecstatic that my story is actually quite excellent. I thank those people for their opinion. On the other hand, I'm a little put down by those people who are suggesting that putting my OC in the story was a bad idea. One or two even left the story solely because the OC put them off.

We fanfiction writers thrive on the opinion of the readers. Everyone is hoping that their story will receive positive response. I have to admit, I was a little discouraged by those reviews, but nothing beyond that. I will focus on the readers that have liked my story now. I promise, I will see this story to the end, like the previous one.

There are a few reasons I introduced an OC. They will come along, but the main one is I wanted to stuff out Sakura's infatuation for Sasuke. It honestly pisses me off, and is very pitiful. There was potential for redemption, which was I did it. The focus will still be Temari and Naruto, with the other pairing more on the sidelines.

On the other hand, I apologize for the late update. I'm suffering from a relapse of fanfiction. You ever suddenly switch your attention and interest from one fanfiction to another? Yeah, I'm back to reading Bleach fanfiction once more. It's damn hard to focus when ideas for another fanfiction are swimming in your head. I hope you all understand.

Onto the story then!

Naruto and Temari lay under their blanket, with the latter on her side and idly tracing circles on Naruto's chest. Naruto was just looking up to the ceiling, lost in the stars he had decorated on the ceiling. It was something that Temari had done for him. She said she found serenity looking at the stars in the night, and hoped they brought it to him too.

Naruto was moved by Temari's love for him.

When they came back from Naruto's test fight, they ate the dinner that Temari had her shadow clones prepare. He was impressed that she was able to manifest five shadow clones with ease, and much more when he tasted her food. He ate every dish with relish, like a man eating homecooked food after a long time, which he was.

After dinner, Naruto had tried out the jacuzzi of his own home for the first time. And it was a memorable experience, only made more enjoyable by Temari joining him inside. The hot water, with jasmine soap bubbles just worked wonders to relax his body.

As they were getting out of the bath, Naruto finally couldn't hold himself in check in anymore, which led them to the bedroom. They didn't go all the way though, since Temari regretfully informed him that she had to depart for Suna tomorrow, and as such needed her legs in working condition. Naruto would have been deeply upset by the news, if Temari hadn't shown how skilled she had become in using her mouth.

Currently, she just lay beside him, running circles with her fingers on his chest, marveling how hard his muscles had become. When Naruto had first taken off his clothes for their bath, Temari had frozen for several moments when she saw his spectacularly improved form, much to her embarrassment.

Of course, Naruto had no such shame in gawking at her body when she removed her bathrobe. Temari had filled out, in the ways only women could. She had gotten rid of almost all the baby fat she had, except for her face. It was narrower than before, but still held hints of baby fat. Her stomach had a, at least according to women standards, defined six pack. Her hips had become deliciously rounded, followed down by toned thighs. Last but not the least, her bust had wonderfully matured, becoming much more rounded with perky nipples.

She was even more beautiful without her clothes.

"You know, I never knew you had such an impressive growth curve, Temari," Naruto commented, never taking his eyes off the stars.