The girl who played with chocolate

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    It was a pretty sunny day in a small town  in Sweden, when a little girl named Susana was walking through a big mall located right in the middle of the town. She was a beautiful 16-year old girl, black hair, and white like milk. Every boy in town desired her, and she was extremely popular at school. Everybody in in town knew her. She was popular even among girls, who envied her beautiful blue eyes, and her perfect complexion. Parents, adults and even older men would stare at her symmetric and mesmerizing body. She was almost perfect, but among all these qualities, Susana had a particular condition; she had an excessive love for chocolates. She would literally eat chocolate all day long. Tons of tons of chocolate, caramel with chocolate, apples, bananas, and strawberries covered of black and brown chocolate. Non-stop chocolate eating, chocolate for breakfast, lunch and dinner.

     She would only stop if she had a big amount of grease inside her body, (which made her develop many horrible diseases), or, until she was satisfied at the fullest and a thread of drool, greasy brown, would come out falling in between her belly.  Everyone in town warned her to stop eating chocolates. She was told by doctors and family that an excessive amount of grease could cause her serious problems to her body, but she never paid attention to these warnings.

     One day, Susana had come back from school. She got home and she got ready to eat another set of creamy chocolates. She had an immense collection of chocolate for her every day’s diet; White chocolate, sweet creamy chocolate, dark chocolate, milk chocolate, peanut-butter chocolate, and bittersweet chocolate.  After eating all kinds of chocolate bars, Susana began feeling weird. Something rare was going on inside of her body. The chocolate and all that grease had been corrupting Susana's intestine. She felt a strong mess inside her stomach; rare noises were coming out of her body. The poor creature began to have an extremely painful feeling. She started throwing up all over the place, brown vomit, liters and liters of gross vomit and blood. There were little pieces of her own stomach on the floor due the intense effort, and therefore, a big amount of blood covered the floor. The poor girl cried loudly, and the pain increased.

    Suddenly, out of nowhere, her neck started to get bigger, and bigger. It began to expand, like a balloon. Susana's skin color turned blue  due the obstruction of oxygen. She was about to spit some strange object with the shape of a big balloon, that thing went from her stomach, to the neck, and then passing through her mouth, destroying every single bone of her face. Finally, Susana spat a big egg of chocolate out of her mouth.

    After these horrible series of events, she fainted, and she stopped suffering, but her face was a deformed gelatinous mass of skin with blood.

When her parents arrived, they were very surprised to see her. Susana's lower jaw was falling apart, leaving the teeth exposed, and gave off the terrible smell of rotten flesh. Her tongue was hanging off her mouth without any support.

     They took her to the hospital. The doctors said that they could not do anything for her because of the extreme deformation. Everyone  there was scare of her ugly face.

     The days passed by, and Susana, unable to talk with people, began suffering severe bullying from other students at school. They would spit at her face and make fun of her. She went from being a beautiful and popular girl to the most horrendous human being on earth. So gradually the poor girl was running out of friends.

     The circus of town offered her a contract of 5 years to work as the main event in their shows. They would pay her enough money to have an operation that would bring her a decent face. Her parents spent all the money they had on medication and after a while, they lost their home due financial problems. Without any other solution, she decided to work for the circus.

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⏰ Last updated: Jan 15, 2013 ⏰

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