BTS Smooth Like Butter AWARDS! ●CLOSED○

WINNERS OF 💎JEON JUNGKOOK💎 CATEGORY

Seriously, we have so many works written on the maknae line and you all are so whipped for badboy/mafia Jeon Jungkook lmao, no offense my beauts.

The FIRST place winner is:
The Girl of my Dreams: Elegia | KimGits 🥇
Score: 96
Judged by kim_cherry_madhatter
The description of the book is very eye catchy and beautiful, especially the poem makes it more beautiful. I'm a but disappointed that the character gave up too easily for my liking, it feels like they are not brave enough to fight the fears and died but the way it was expressed truly makes readers shed a tear or few. The plot looks simple but the descriptive writing is what catches the eye. The flow was good too!
Overall, the book is great and the cover is too cool. It's actually the most amazing book I've read for Jungkook biased book!

The SECOND place winner is:
Lovelorn liar | giakfanfiqs 🥈
Score: 95
Judged by kdarmygirl
Personally, I've read the book too and it's such a good book, it just draws us in so good! Too much angst though. But a good story line! Taehyung being abusive broke my heart at every other chapter because he keeps abusing her like ??? stop she's human.
A good book anyway!

The THIRD place winner is:
Your Eyes Tell | 123hikibakas 🥉
Score: 94
The book is just as beautiful as the song, guys. It has a twisty baseline story which intrigues the readers and keeps them on the edge. Someone is actually a mafia here~~

The competition here tho^^96, 95, 94 💎💎

Paid for rent | Local_hoe_69
Score: 78
Judged by Kookiebuns1997
Sweets your book is good with a nice plot line, full of humor. You need to work at your grammar at times since I found many
mistakes there. The Title and Story correlation is perfect but the fact that 'Paid for Rent' is used for V not Jungkook
and being a JJK fic, I guess the major focus should be on Jungkook. There are a few plotholes in the story, do reread! The background setting is missing, like how the school's heartthrob and nerd ended up together and all you know, the readers would really love to read all that and one
more....how can V talk LMAO I am really loving it. The only obstacle that comes
up is lack of focus on the main character.

For you | Niannez01
Score: 90
Judged by kdarmygirl
THE PLOT 👁👄👁✨✨
Y/n actually got kidnapped lmao. We all do love bad boy/mafia/gangster JayKay anyway hehehe.

The Moment we met | Arishagem09
Score: 82.5
Judged by kdarmygirl
Really subtle story line but I as a fellow author would suggest you dear, that you do put some efforts on your grammar and vocabulary. The dialogue structure is a bit unique but accepted!

Bodyguard | Endeavour_baddie
Score: 86
Judged by Kookiebuns1997
First of all I really love the book and am waiting for updates. Back to point, the description is simple, it is indeed intriguing but add some finishing touches there. The Title perfectly fits the story but the name is extremely common, I would advice you to
find something unique which will attract users and make it stand out. The cover is really beautiful. At places I found some grammatical errors specifically with tenses so do look into it. The Plot is good and right from the first chapter it has some mysteries
which seriously give the reader anxiety (*.*) but there are some plotholes and errors.
If Jungkook was her father's bodyguard why wasn't he able to save him and then Kook was there before her father died and even told Kook to take care of her daughter. If Jungkook was his bodyguard wasn't he supposed to get injured first then her father?
That the alligator one seemed really unreal. Like how did the alligator or the person who brought it, came in the school premises and that too without getting noticed and then Jungkook barging into the same class, shooting the animal saving Areum. Plus didn't it cause a chaos upon hearing the loud bang. It needs a bit editing, hope you look into it. Overall your book is really nice, you need to proof-read it once which I
guess you haven't done yet.