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This will give you my thoughts on Twilight Fanfictions I've read. Each chapter I will upload will be different stories with their details and the reviews. Also a heads up, I haven't read the books so my only reference is the movies. Please read the...

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Little Wolf (Complete)

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by Jaymic7397

by Jaymic7397

TITLE: Little Wolf (Complete)

AUTHOR: _Gantrick_ - @_Gantrick_

SOURCE: Wattpad - https://www.wattpad.com/story/223163553-little-wolf-complete

STATUS: Completed

TAGS: #alicecullen #bellacullen #bellaswan #billyblack #breakingdawn #bxb #carlislecullen #daddy #daddydom #ddlb #eclipse #edwardcullen #emilyuley #emmetcullen #esmecullen #jacobblack #jasperhale #lb #littleboy #mommy mommydom #newmoon #rosaliehale #samuley #twilight

ADDIONATAL TAGS: #BellaSwanBashing #CharlieSwanBashing #ManxBoyxWoman #MxBxW #Polyamorous #Poly #Twins

SUMMARY:

*warning*

This is Daddy Dom / Mommy Dom / little boy book.

There will be poly relationship in this book.

There will be Bella Bashing in this book.

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Fin Swan is Isabella (or Bella) younger twin bother. The two are nothing alike though. Fin has blond hair and galaxy looking eyes. He is shy and clumsy. Bella is shy and clumsy as well, though is willing to make friends.

Fin has a secret that even his sister does not know. He is a little. Renee use to cader to Fin loving the idea of a child that never grows up.

how will a mated pair of wolves deal with the fact that they have a third party in the mix? will they accept fin or reject him? how will they handle it when vampires start coming around their mate?

RATING: 6/10

REVIEW:

This was actually a good story that only focuses on building a relationship from a canon ship and an outside character (OC). With the OC fitting in the relationship dynamic of the canon ship by making them have a kink. Though it was not sexual more on because of the mental state of the outside character.

This is also a story bashing on Bella and Charlie Swan. The reason was in the story itself. But I would say that it was so focused on the OC that the original story's timeline and plot was completely disregarded. So it is best if you completely disregard it as you will just be confused. This is one of the reason I rated it lowly the other was that some of the character actually doesn't retain their personalities.

There are few grammatical error and misused words. But it is minimal that you can neglect. So, If you don't the things that I pointed out, I will recommend that you read it.